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13 February 2010, 10:57 AM   #1
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Last edited by Oroborus21, 13 February 2010
I write poetry in my sleep My passion for you runs that deep The verse and rhythm are not that perfect But to my mind there is no defect For every line which speaks of you Might surmount the heights and yet not nearly do To compass your beauty, your spirit or unrivaled template Your sophisticated qualities exquisitely delicate Even if I was the world's greatest poet No words could satisfy its greatest subject (4 am, 2/13/10)

13 February 2010, 11:18 AM   #2
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i like that poem!

13 February 2010, 02:18 PM    #3
Joined: 7 Oct 2009
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Wow, Eddie, that's an incredible poem.
I adore it.
The girl who's inspiration to you is lucky to have such beautiful words represent her.

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