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WRITING: Poetry: Unlove Letters ( Tres )

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26 September 2009, 01:53 PM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 26 September 2009
Tres . Every morning, every day, We're on the bus in our same old way; Your arms are wrapped around my waist, But your love-filled eyes I just can't face. Your lips they whisper Beautiful Up against my ears; I bite my lip and smile To cover hidden tears. You're the vase that's falling, And I'll try to catch you, I will; But it's hard to keep on sprinting Up such a rocky hill. And every time I pull away From your lip's strong hold, I think I can assuredly say that you've seen my heart's gone cold. You were the jewelry I just couldn't buy The bracelet I couldn't afford; But now I'm regretting the purchase, My head and my heart's become bored.

26 September 2009, 02:01 PM   #2
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That's... so good.
I like the third versy thing...
The rocky hill was a good comparison.

26 September 2009, 03:47 PM   #3
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sounds very poetic -- well donte.

27 September 2009, 09:21 PM   #4
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(: thank you guys . it means a lot that people actually like things I write haha .

28 September 2009, 11:28 AM   #5
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29 September 2009, 07:23 PM   #6
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haha thank you(;

22 December 2009, 08:56 PM   #7
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Wow.That's really deep and extremely beautiful.

22 December 2009, 10:11 PM   #8
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thank you so much (:

23 December 2009, 03:42 PM    #9
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hey, nice one
love isn't really immortal, right?

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