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WRITING: Poetry: Global Warming

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27 June 2009, 09:47 AM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 28 June 2009
They pull in, they pull out
they splash and they dash,
as one goes in the other goes out,
sucking seaweed and small fish of all about.
sometimes strong, thou sometimes weak
sometimes even with a seaweed streak.

 So that's how the sea works 
with it's magical ways,
 pulling and sucking until the last day.
for the day to come when the world will end, and the splashing water will come to an
For one day when the sea ends...the earth will have no more tears to shed.
For Earth will not revolve and humans will not win,
for mother Earth will always win.
No matter how fast, no matter how thin,
if global warming continues the seas will surely end..

stop global warming!
if you want this not to happen comment this!

27 June 2009, 10:38 AM   #2
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thats good.its true...it shows how much you love the earth

27 June 2009, 10:50 AM   #3
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yup i'm a green girl!

27 June 2009, 11:19 AM   #4
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This is good actually, but you spelled words wrong and didn't use commas on some of the

Oh, but I really did like this one. The words go together nice.

Your title isn't really right though. If you read the orientation rules, then you must
know that the title (in your case) goes sort of like:

WRITING: Poetry: Global Warming

Super great job on this. 

27 June 2009, 12:04 PM   #5
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thankz I got better thankz 2 u!

27 June 2009, 05:05 PM    #6
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Writing: poetry:global warming
That should be where
global warming.....I tried to follow the format of poetry tell me if it's right plz!
that is .

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