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Saturday, 14 January 2012
02:25:22 AM (GMT)
C h i p p e d

You’re quite a sight
to behold, darling.
But I’m sure your
face is iced
an inch thick
like a grandma’s cake;
her crinkled hands
busy concealing the dull
surface with sugary sweet
frost.

Your shoes are a dazzling 
gold, darling, just as radiant
as your pearly white 
smile.
But with further inspection
I notice the clear plastic 
braces secretly straightening 
 out your teeth, drawing 
no attention
to your imperfections.
Or so you think.

Even those bold Gucci 
shoes have their own
faults, darling.
The paint is 
c  h i p p e d, 
exposing the ugly 
natural colour of your 
shoes.
Just like you.
You’re chipped.


(A poem I wrote with a guy narrator.)

Comments 
Trentish says:   14 January 2012   264550  
*claps for you* *cheers* :D
 
lillymill says:   14 January 2012   336592  
xD thanks. I like doing poems but usually mine aren't very good--
this is probably one of my favourites.
 
Trentish says:   14 January 2012   706103  
Well it's pretty good  I like it
 
Trentish says:   14 January 2012   410372  
I don't lay much attention to poetry, but I like this one
 
lillymill says:   14 January 2012   851033  
thanks :D
 
Trentish says :   15 January 2012   849431  
Your very welcome 
 

 
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