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A Poem About LifeCategory: (general)
Tuesday, 6 July 2010
09:46:07 PM (GMT)
Sprials, spirals, spiraling down
Nothing is right in this world
Take me round and show me a life
A life where I wouldn't need a knife
To cut my pain in little bits
And make the blood splatter
On a shattered mirror
It will reflect my face
My mind will race
Then I'll realize whats my fear
My eyes will drop a tear
I don't want to die
I don't want to die alone
In this lonely world

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fly says:   7 July 2010   144345  
 
KaraLi_Lovends says:   7 July 2010   896535  
@fly 
OHH goody!
Well isn't that just WONDERFUL?! :/ 
 
fly says:   7 July 2010   912413  
OKay, But in all actuality.

Your poem shows promise.
Keep practicing.


Just try to steer away from the emo poetry.
 
KaraLi_Lovends says :   7 July 2010   117798  
Ugh...I'll try, thx for the support! :D
 

 
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