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The little orphan chapter 10Category: The little orphan story
Saturday, 5 July 2008
02:26:18 PM (GMT)
"I can't believe she did that." it was a few hours after the rescue,and Mana had still not returned. Eichiro was recovering quite well. But his mind was filled with the thoughts of the horrrors that could happen to Mana...She'd most likely been captured,maybe even killed. He hoped not. He still couldn't get over the fact that she sacrificed herself for her friends... "I say it was a stupid thing for her to do." Sera says sourly. "If she didn't do it,we'd be captured,probably killed.and where would that take us?" Ato replied grimly. There was a murmer of agreement from the others. Sadly,there was nothing they could do until Eichiro healed fully. It would take another day... He hoped he could connect with her in his dreams,like before. but that would have to wait until he fell asleep.He felt responcible for her capture,and he kept cursing to himself over and over again...He shouldn't had made Mana risk her life to rescue him. And she did. The sky's hue was slowly changing from blue to orange and purple-gray. "It's getting late. We should rest. we can't do anything for Mana until Eichiro's leg has healed." Kiri mentioned as she lay back. There was agreement from the others as they did the same. Eichiro was the last one to fall asleep as the sky went to dark indigo. He stayed up for awhile,still cursing himself about Mana's capture. But at last he fell asleep. * He found himself at the front of the castle. he knew he was dreaming. he had done dream travel before. He ran into the large structure and went to search for Mana. It was his fault she was in this mess,and Eichiro had to make up for it. He knew the castle a lot better then the others,so he found the dungeon in record time. He searched the cells,looking for Mana in hopes of raising her spirits. At last he found something. Mana's backpack on the floor of one cell. He hastily looked through. Her flute was missing. He cusred silently and put a large mark on the door,so they'd know which one it was. He went back to the entrence to find the sun was rising. He took one last look into the forbidding corridors until he faded from sight. * Eichiro was the first of the group to wake up. The pain in his leg had lessened,but it still hurt. he painfully sat up. The group didn't know much about healing,but they did a decent job on his leg. He could walk,but he couldn't run. In another day,possibly... He wouldn't explain anything about the prediciment until they rescued Mana. He painfully stood up and started to walk around. He needed a walk to clear his head. He woud definitly come back,and he wouldn't stray far from the camp,in case the group wake up and think he ditched them. He knew every tree in the rockies,so he'd not get lost. but something bothered him the whole time. He kept feeling this pair of eyes watching his back,and whenever he looked back,there was nothing in sight. He decided not to worry about it. He could deal with anything in the rockies. well...ALMOST anything. The sky had lighted up,and the group was probably was waking up now,so he headed back to camp. what they would do to save Mana,he wasn't sure of,but it had to be soon. Mana might not have much time left. or no time at all. The kidnapper was a dangerous man. he wouldn't hesitate to kill her. but he wouldn't let that happen!

‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   5 July 2008   215675  
gettin interesing :] can't wait for next chapter xD
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   5 July 2008   789572  
thank you 
Kirti says:   6 July 2008   614189  
yaaaay it's so good!

but there is something I don't get. one person runs further
into the castle, the rest are about to escape, and they chase the one
going towardsp/i] capture? couldn't they let the other dungon
guards get Mana and make sure the rest stay put?

Evil villians reply:I know, but it's so hard to find good help
these days.

sorry, you can delete this comment if you like.
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   6 July 2008   217469  
lol no it's ok i liked that XD
MeepingMeep says:   7 July 2008   556962  
Yippee! It's still goin good! Wait... yippee? Ok... Um, nvm.
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   7 July 2008   767177  
XD lol
the guards are stupid lol
‹{☜☏☞}› says:   7 July 2008   873221  
Is my character going to be in the story ( the character I sent you
on the Kupipage)? She has a gift to heal people and the sword of mist
actually help to clear your mind of things,HOpe that this info is

XXX SpacedustchaserXXX
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   7 July 2008   675726  
I have a good place for her in the story,but i can't garrentee i will
use her (although she has a pretty good chance!)
callie11 says:   8 July 2008   825921  
I'm liking the story more and more, and it's about to get really
interesting...I can't wait for the next chapter!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   8 July 2008   385949  
Ok  i'm workin on it :P
purple_bubbles says:   14 February 2009   313698  
it's great! I ♥ your story!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   14 February 2009   671272  
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   469622  
Eichiro sooo fancies Mana, doesn't he? 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 May 2009   497936  
...I'm not saying anything on the subject.
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says :   1 May 2009   537622  


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