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Wednesday, 25 June 2008
12:05:05 AM (GMT)
Remember when nothing ever 
Had a "double meaning",
Kissing was nasty 
And boys had cooties,

You were popular if you got a new toy,
Not if you were a jerk
People liked you if you were nice
Not "cool",

Your friend would always be on your side
And nothing would ever come between you
If you were friends with a boy 
It didnt mean you liked him,

The only thing you drank 
Was apple juice
The only thing that could be broken
Was a toy or bone not your heart,


Your mommy and daddy were your heros,
And good bye only meant until tomarrow 

Now look at your life...its the total opposite
Now heres the funny part 
All I remember thinking, when I was little,
"Is want to grow up."


Taduh.
Last edited: 25 June 2008

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saralyn247 says:   25 June 2008   872662  
That's great. <3

It's kinda funny you wrote this now... I've been thinking things like
that lately. A few days ago I started looking at my baby pictures and
thingking "Wow... life was so nice and simple then. I want that
back..."
 
‹Mad♥Hatter♥Love› says:   25 June 2008   231476  
Ain't that the truth! 
I LUVZ IT!
 
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   25 June 2008   516285  
Sara:Thanks :] Yeah. Same for me..

Mizzkatee:Haha.Thanks :]
 
i_am_a_ganster_ says:   25 June 2008   277564  
so true ecept that we never had cooties just an excuse ur parents
made up to keep u from kissin boys
xxMiyuxx says:   25 June 2008   176761  
i love the ending!!!! great poem!!!!!!!
Oroborus21 says:   25 June 2008   697977  
pretty good pretty good. 

to me its more prose than verse but its somewhat lyrical..in fact it
seems more like  a song than poetry.

ive seen a similar sentiment expressed in several other things and it
reminds me of two songs: one by John Cougar Mellencamp...which
includes the line

"when holding hands meant something baby!"

and a more recent Country song (not sure of the artist) that sounds
real similar.

the ending is nice. (you left out an "I" pronoun) im pretty sure.

you should share more Bekah, another lovely facet of you.
 
‹<>.AthenaHadTheWorld.<>› whispers:   25 June 2008   838449  
Good concept.
 
charmed101 says:   25 June 2008   962728  
that poem was so true .....
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   25 June 2008   747321  
THanksss you peoplee :]

Eddie:Mmmnn. It took me like, 10 minutes to write.

BUt I might start writing more on kupika :]]
 
Kage says:   25 June 2008   949757  
true, it makes you kinda sad if you think too much about that kinda
stuff (or your head hurts)
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   25 June 2008   937873  
Yeahhh :/
 
‹The Pursuit of Happiness› says:   25 June 2008   959997  
yup :P

i like it

:P

around where i live we dont care

bout popularity

well me and my freinds dont

we just have fun :P

but ya 

its realy good :D

5/5
 
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   25 June 2008   439153  
Thank youu :]
 
shylover3 says:   25 June 2008   371313  
ya know that describes all of our live well every one that doesen't
have a normal life
Timelord says:   26 June 2008   461288  
This is great! :D
 
‹medusaaaa🍪› says :   26 June 2008   539823  
Thanks :]
 

 
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