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Saturday, 12 January 2008
04:16:43 AM (GMT)
We're wasting the day
We're wasting away
Let's take some time
to look back on our crime

Its a crime to say goodbye
To all we had;it hurts so bad
Its a crime to lose it all through free will
To lose the love sent from above

I've trapped myself away 
I guess I've been too afraid
Of what the world turned out to be
But all I to survive is me

I'll run and run until I've found the one
I won't hide anymore,with that I'm done
I'll keep trying until I get it right
I'll keep trying every day,all night

I'll eventually have to quit
But not yet,I'll have my trip
I won't go without a fight
I'll soon find the bright light

Is this goodbye?
To what I had?
Is running away just a fad?

Will we work it out
And find the truth 
Of everything that fell to loose

I'll take some time to hide away
I'll try again some other day

I'll trap myself inside
I'll wait forever 
Until the pain has died.

‹HANNER› says:   12 January 2008   568446  
You have such a talent. Seriously. You dont know what you have. I
mean, if I could write like you.. I would write EVERYTHING in poems.
‹HANNER› says:   12 January 2008   474118  
Your poem is good.
I want to wear a hood.
Then I can be like a gangsta.
But then people will be scared. HAH.

Back to your poem.
You really got some skill.
I loved it all.
It's like a hill.


You are really skilled.
I wish I could write like you.
Because you're genius.


Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
I wish I could write,
just like you.

Roses are red.
Your poems are sexy.
I think you have alot of talent.
And I know someone named Lexy..

Oranges are Orange,
Violets are blue.
You make good rhymes,
I bet you could fine one that rhymes with Orange.

‹SunLitMoon.› says:   13 January 2008   259498  
I must say,your poem was an...honest attempt.
If you can't get something in rhyming,you'll get credit for comedy.
Its was cool,though!
‹HANNER› says:   13 January 2008   961745  
I like haiku's... they're easy.. and short.
‹SunLitMoon.› says :   18 January 2008   474615  
Eh,I don't think they're that easy.
I don't like to have to think that much in poetry,I just wing it and
let my emotions control whatever words.

Dude,that was deeep...


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