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my poetry and drawingsCategory: (general)
Sunday, 23 December 2007
12:35:03 AM (GMT)
As I Lie Silently

I can hear the screaming,

I can see his hand tightly around her neck.

Her head against the door unable to move.

As I Lie Silenlty

I can hear his breath, heavy from dealing

With her tormenting struggle.

I can see the blood slowly running down her face.

As I Lie Silently

She looks at me, Helpless, crying and

Screaming for help in her eyes.

I see fear in her eyes, She's fading away.

As I Lie Silently

I try to move, to help her, but can not.

I see her eyes slowly close,

And he whispers in her ear, " I'm sorry."


If I could be anything....

anyone.. just for a day...

I would be yours.

All I would need is one day...

to satisfy me.

I just want a chance

to say 


‹underage› says:   23 December 2007   769843  
Your poetry is very nice, I like how it flows, but tells somewhat of
a story.
Your drawing is very nice, and I believe the only thing that is wrong
with it is proportion, which is hard to notice.
Very nice job, I wish to become like you. ^____^
EMO_SASUKE_ says:   24 December 2007   853781  


 what r u trying to do be all popular............xD.............they
bore me
EMO_SASUKE_ says:   24 December 2007   885377  
but the pic is good
Sakura_Suicide says :   28 December 2007   225753  
pshh,  Id LOVE to see some of your poetry


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