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(Chapter 1: Yuki~part 1: New 14 year old beginning)Category: A girl named Yuki
Wednesday, 10 October 2007
10:12:37 PM (GMT)
It was 3:33 am...She was made a long tyme ago.....in an igloo. it was so
cold......when Yuki was born, she didnt cry....instead she slept quietly. Her
father,Juro, took her outside into the snowy outing. suddenly she began to
cry.......she was alive then and there.....so she was named Yuki. Yuki meaning snow
in the Japanese language...but she doesnt know that....or does she? only one way to
find out! READ!

14 years later

Yuki: Father. im ready to go outside for our walk
Juro: Yes Yuki. As am i...I shall be ready soon. Put your poncho on and wrap up
tight.
Yuki: Okay father.
*Juro walks into the kitchen and stares at the calendar*
Juro: I cant believe this is the last walk i have with my Yuki for the rest of the
year...
*Yuki walks into the kitchen curiously*
Yuki: Why? I love taking walks with you...
Juro: you star public school tomorrow Yuki.
Yuki: What is public school like? *puts on a skullie hat*
Juro: It will be great. I promise. Just remember all your mother has taught
you...*looks down*
Yuki: Father dont be down. I will have fun at school! For you...and mom!
Juro: I'm sure she'd like that....
*Yuki smiles with a distant stare*
Juro: Now come on, lets go. It's starting to snow again.
Yuki: Oh hooray! I love the snow!
*juro and yuki walk outside into the snow as yuki spins around laughing*
Juro: *laughs* Stop spinning. You'll get dizzy!
Yuki: TOO LATE! *falls into a small pile of snow* Oof!
Juro: *extends hand* Come on...we've much to discuss about public school...
Yuki: And ruin the wonderful moment father? Why?
Juro: Because you must know what you're in for tomorrow.
Yuki: I'd rather bear the surprise! *grabs Juro's hand and gets up*
Juro: Well you must know something....okay Yuki?
Yuki: oh fine....
*Juro looks down at her scary-like*
Yuki: I-I mean....Yes father?
*Juro looks away with a distant grin and keeps walking*
Yuki: hey! wait up mister father! *giggles while she spins to him*

I hope you all liked the first chaper and first part of my new online story/dialogue
"a girl named Yuki"
(Part 2: PS..public school) will be soon

Comments 
cherrystrawberry says:   10 October 2007   891477  
....its ok............how they talk is a little weird for the time it
seems they are in.....like public school and stuff............but i
like it.......but it needs the rest of the story! type write think!
courtnee !!!!! you must!!
 
‹CuzImNiceLykeDat<3› says:   10 October 2007   979774  
i know!!!!!!! i just felt like writing that way because he is old
teaching old people language to a young girl who has never been to
public school and i based yuki on yuki from avatar: the last
airbender!
cherrystrawberry says:   10 October 2007   286773  
oooooh ok cool
 
i_silverdragon94 says:   7 November 2007   187291  
oh and you put star instead of start where juro says that yuki will
be starting public school you put star school .................but
other than that i like it!
‹CuzImNiceLykeDat<3› says:   11 November 2007   314949  
i know, izabela........
i_silverdragon94 says:   22 November 2007   591543  
oh....ok...........................did you do that on porpose??
‹CuzImNiceLykeDat<3› says :   23 November 2007   622244  
no......izzy........

 
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