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Thursday, 18 November 2010
06:12:40 AM (GMT)
This is a poem.

It is about my NaNoWriMo story, but it isn't my NaNoWriMo.
Therefore it is a waste of time.
I won't finish it. I won't.

... Maybe if I don't think it's crap in December.

"It can’t be death,
Nor any lack of wealth
It will not be dishonor
Nor a frailty of health

Expecting no glory
Then receiving none
This is the tale
Of the cityling’s son

Unloved for his magic
Beaten from pride
Not knowing ‘twas tragic
And then cast aside

Becoming a servant
Loyalty toppling kings
His duty was fervent
Overcoming all things

His employment just happened
When he was still young
Though long since heart hardened
Giving help to this one
His master had more
Than he’d been forbidden to desire
To protect him he swore
He’d endure water and fire 

Earning lifelong devotion
Yet not knowing why
Sustained by the notion
He could reach for the sky

The Master accepted
For he could not understand
Having been always excepted
Work was all the boy had

An enduring vassal
Such things were so rare
Outside of the castle 
Where we find the pair

Master unwillingly
Involved with a plan
A war killing just three
Two by one man

-- "
Last edited: 18 November 2010

‹Pâtisserie› says:   24 July 2011   259154  
Holy cow, you're amazing.
Just... wow.
I can just imagine how you're writing is...
Kirti says:   24 July 2011   991685  
Oh, please don't! I've never been a poet- I wrote this in a fit of
sleep deprivation. 
Kirti says :   24 July 2011   934568  
Oh the misjudged numbers of syllables... -twitch-


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