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<<UNKNOWN>> (part 2)Category: Stories
Sunday, 11 July 2010
11:44:22 PM (GMT)
Each of my arms were lifted as I agreed to go to the hospital. My hearing started to
shorten out. By the looks of it, Alisen was holding her feeble screams by clinching
her jaw. Jane was holding most of my weight, I could tell, Alisen was holding very
little, but seemed to challenge more onto herself. Being gently transported to the
back seat, Alisen got to the other side so my head would be in her lap. My legs were
bent to my chest to fit in the rest of the backseat. Alisen stroked my face and hair
as Jane got into the front seat, starting the car fast as possible. The song "I don't
believe you" by Pink just started to play on the radio. My vision was just clear
enough when I saw Jane starting to turn the station.

"No!" I meant to shout but only a whisper came out.
"Jane, she doesn't want you to turn the station." Alisen said louder than me. Jane
just nodded and her hands returned to the wheel as she drove faster, passing the
house I escaped from. I closed my eyes and pictures of one guy flashed by. I could
only tell his eyes were a warm brown. So warm, every time I saw it my body filled
with heat. I wanted to get closer. Then hatred filled my mind. A mental shove hit my
shoulders and I jerk. Alisen stroke my face more, and I noticed she stopped when it
got to the chorus. My eyes flashed open and the car stopped. when the last words were
sang, "I don't... believe you..."

Jane climbed out of the car, yanking the keys out of the ignition, and grabbed the
handle to the back of her car open. Alisen slowly picked my head up from her lap and
set it on the seat as she climbed out to help Jane. I couldn't help them, I had to
stay focus on not screaming, for Alisen's sake. The pain was shooting up and down my
leg and sides. My private areas more. It wasn't uncomfortable, but it wasn't wanted
either. I look back weakly behind us as we enter the hospital and I realize blood was
everywhere on the ground from where I stood. I look sorry at Jane.

"Sorry about your car...." I didn't want it to ruin.
"It's leather, easy to wipe up." Jane replyed and smiled, looking at me and Alisen
ran to the nurses. "Don't worry about it, the car isn't going through as much as you
are at the moment."
"What do you mean?" Alisen disappeared from the hall, probably getting a bed for me
to lay in. Jane looked at me confused.
"What hurts right now?"
"Umm... Well, honestly, my legs sides, and private areas. I think that's from pushing
myself to run though."
"Think about it." That's what she said last to me. She sat us down then I realized
one thing when a light was shining in my eyes. I passed out.

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Last edited: 7 November 2010

Comments 
ApplesAndBananas says:   13 July 2010   612209  
Ohh this is getting really good!
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says:   16 July 2010   810627  
@ApplesAndBananas 
Thanks.. >.< I'm at an author's pause though. 
 
‹xsilentxtearsxfallx› says:   3 November 2010   589248  
Really good. I hate those pauses though..
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says:   3 November 2010   320831  
@the_quiet_one_speaks 
I know what you mean. I've been writing on the story, but I haven't
gotten much farther with it. I got sorta lazy with my work though. 
 
‹xsilentxtearsxfallx› says:   3 November 2010   193171  
@Crescent_Darkness 
I have this other story I started in 9th grade (about 6 years
ago..keep getting stuck). 
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says:   3 November 2010   618212  
@the_quiet_one_speaks 
I started this one over the summer. I work on it here and there, but
not all the time. 
 
‹xsilentxtearsxfallx› says:   3 November 2010   367310  
@Crescent_Darkness 
I like my other one much better. But I don't know if I should post it
or not. 
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says:   3 November 2010   675570  
@the_quiet_one_speaks 
You should, I have to go, but I promise to read it tomorrow. 
 
‹xsilentxtearsxfallx› says:   3 November 2010   406410  
@Crescent_Darkness 
Okay. Later! 
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says:   3 November 2010   710953  
@the_quiet_one_speaks 
I'm back, but I don't see any new stories on. :o 
 
‹xsilentxtearsxfallx› says:   3 November 2010   323150  
@Crescent_Darkness 
I'm working on it. Want to go over a few things. I should have
something up later on today. 
 
‹✬Kaybell❣› says :   4 November 2010   959570  
 

 
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