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Poetry... Tell me what you think.Category: (general)
Friday, 4 September 2009
03:45:23 AM (GMT)
Ok so I started writing some Poetry a while ago. Some were for school and others
were for fun but I wanted to know what other people thought of it. P.S. Some may be
really bad so beware!

 Puzzle Unfinished 
Missing just a single piece
pleading complete me.

The Butterfly
A messenger from beyond
A lost loved one
A special friend
Their soul as beautiful as the wings that carry it.

Sweet Dreams
In my dreams it all comes back to me
It always seems to be that sleep is the key
In setting all of my forgotten thoughts free
If only there was a way
For me to see them through the day
And to make sense of what my mind truly wants for me.

The world will be our playground
For we have nothing but time to lose
We'll climb the highest mountains
and never look back down
We'll jump up off the peaks only to float into the sky
Where we can spend the rest of our days
Dancing among the rainbows
And sleeping in the clouds.


For what seems like forever
A simple phrase has been trapped within my heart
and with great power 
It pounds on the walls
They are slipping from my grasp
Breaking their chains
They are running to you
Searching for freedom

Send me up,
High above the clouds
Where the sea of stars wraps around us
Send me Off,
Riding in a rocketship of dreams 
To explore the universe and the secrets held within
Send me in,
The direction in which you stand
So that I might see
Your face in the moon once again.

Thanks for reading,

twilight_lover_yah says:   4 September 2009   818886  
Is poetry supposed to rhyme. If not it was cool!!!!!!! =)
starla101 says:   4 September 2009   439839  
I like poetry and I got to say the 'FREE' one was impressive!!=3
‹{SWD}-Ariel› says:   4 September 2009   818884  
hehe cool 
Emily7757 says :   4 September 2009   111979  
Thanks so much! And no poetry does not always have to rhyme there are
tons of different kinds of poetry.


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