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Saturday, 11 July 2009
02:28:25 AM (GMT)
A cold wind blows.
She looks down.
Sees the city lights, all the cars, all the people.
It's almost midnight she thinks.
How funny, the city is not yet asleep.
But it doesn't matter.
She wont be here long.
She left them all behind, all asleep in their beds.
They wont know until morning, or the news hits.
She'll be long gone by then, because she learned, life is not a fucking fairytale.
She's going to jump.
People have noticed her.
A crowd gathers, police are called.
They try to get her down.
She's not going to listen. 
Why should she?
They are nothing to her.
She leans forward looking down.
But she has not noticed the boy behind her.
He's about her age too, he looks concerned.
He knows her and he wants to help her.
She doesn't recognise him, but she should.
He begins talking, but she won't listen to him.
She thinks he is nothing to her.
He reaches forward holding out his hand.
She looks at him, he looks scared, and worried.
About her?
"Please don't jump"
She, shakes her head laughing, and with that, she leans backwards.
She's gone.
He's broken.
Beause she thought no one cared.
Because he knew he loved her.

Comments 
Snow_Flower says:   11 July 2009   572845  
this reminds me of a dream i had.....

good job thats really cool...

....but creepy

^_\|//_^
‹automatic› says:   11 July 2009   663621  
Hehe, i know what you mean.
Dreams can be so real, this was a vison of mine shall we say.
Thankyou, i specialise in sad or scary writing i think.
It's easy to write.
Lol
(:
 
‹ifONLYtonight.› says:   11 July 2009   129133  
ilovethisstory(:
itssosweet
 
‹automatic› says:   11 July 2009   475569  
Lol.
Sweet, but sad.
(:
 
Sonnefeuer says:   11 July 2009   468662  
Tokio Hotel, I presume <3?
I love it dear.
So much emotion in it.
 
‹automatic› says:   11 July 2009   551936  
Oui, the song name felt apropriate.
(:
Thankyou love<3
I tried, i felt it at one point.
 
Ralphieboy says:   27 September 2009   314636  
It had a nice ending ,now he jumps and both them are happy
 
‹automatic› says:   27 September 2009   843495  
Lol, nopee it's sad cause he's left without her
 
TheGirlWithDaVoice says:   28 September 2009   572845  
Such a sad subject, but I loved the work.
 
‹automatic› says:   28 September 2009   831353  
Thankyou, I find writing about sad subjects east for some reason. (:
 
‹Destined for Disaster♥› says:   10 October 2009   938936  
Thats kinda sad ;-;
But very good in general :D
I never really feel sad from just reading something but i felt sorry
for the boy this time. You have to be good at writing to get through
me. Idk why but good job.
♥
 
‹automatic› says:   14 October 2009   187272  
Well thankyou for that.
:]
I love writing tbh.But i dunno lol.
 
ZombieKaulitz says:   23 October 2009   428592  
That is really good.
<3
 
‹DasAtem› says:   23 October 2009   441964  
That sounds so pretty.
I thought of Tokio Hotel right at the title.
..And your username.

But this sounds amazing.
Very.. emotional.
 
‹automatic› says:   24 October 2009   593627  
@ZombieKaulitz: Thankyouu :] <3
@QueenOfGreen: Yeaah, i'ma Tokio Hotel fan<3 andd thankyou very much
:D 
 
thelightsgoblink says:   7 November 2009   734333  
Tokio Hotel fur immer.
♥
 
DatGurl says:   7 November 2009   551669  
:""[. awwwwwww *cry*
 
‹automatic› says :   8 November 2009   964571  
Tokio Hotel = ♥
:] thanks
 
 
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