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The Little Orphan chapter 20Category: The little orphan story
Monday, 1 September 2008
11:53:26 PM (GMT)
Mana grasped onto Eichiro's waist, in fear of falling off Taheiji's back as they flew to Arisa's home. A question suddenly flew into her mind. "Eichiro, what was my mother's name?" Eichiro was caught off-guard, and hesitated before he responded. "I...really don't remember. I know I've heard it before, but it fails me. I'll tell you if I remember." It wasn't the answer Mana was hoping for, but she would have to accept it. She could only pray Eichiro would remember. If she had come from this world, she could very well still be alive and well! But if Shikuro had already got her... No! I have to keep high hopes! Mana fought the thoughts out of her head. Chinatsu flew up beside them. "The castle is near! You should start your descent!" She called. Eichiro nodded, and Taheiji lowered his nose in a steep dive. It felt like a dive on a roller coaster, but much more dangerous. Mana squeezed Eichiro's waist, horrified of falling. It was a long and horrifying dive, but they made it to the ground in one piece. "Uh...Mana? Can you please let go of my waist?" Mana quickly released him, shocked she was still holding him. What was it with her and Eichiro...? Mana looked around at her surroundings. She didn't see anything but forest. But she was wrong. Righit in front of her was a large castle. And what a castle it was! Hundreds of trees had woven together to make a huge structure. It was covered in Ivy, and was almost invisible. It was a sight to behold, yet barely a sight at all. Chinatsu flew ahead of them and led them into the castle. It was just as magnificent inside as it was out. Tree trunks entangled with ivy were used as pillars, a few pieces of art covered the walls. It was made of marble, it could easily be mistaken as a greek temple. The art pieces behind glass were made of different coloured leafs that were put together nicely to create pictures. They were led through corridors and corridors. Mana wasn't sure when it would end! But they soon reached a large room, which Mana assumed was the throne room. At the end was a she-elf. She had long blonde hair, and wore a circlet as a tiara. Her tunic looked more like a bikini, dyed green and trimmed gold. Fancy boots went up past her knee's, almost to her upper body. At her side was a decoritive bow with Black and white feathers on eather tip. Wrapped around her was a green dragon. This dragon wasn't like the others Mana had seen in movies and books. This dragon was a lot smaller, and had a ruby encased in it's brow. It looked like it was made for speed. Chinatsu flew ahead of them to the she-eld, which Mana assumed was Arisa. She whispered to Arisa some things that no human could hear at their distance, and she perked up. She get up and left her dragon to greet her guests. "When I heard rumours that the prince had returned, I was shocked enough. But when I heard the Chosenplayer had arrived as well, I had to get you two to make sure. And the rumours are true!" Arisa turned to Eichiro. "Exuse me for being rude but, how the heck are you still alive? Everyone thought Shikuro had gotten you and fed you to his dragon!" Shikuro has a dragon?? Great... "Well, I-" "Never mind. You can tell me later. Welcome back." She nearly spat out the last sentence. Mana was a bit shocked at this. "Good to see you too, Arisa" Eichiro replied with a smile. Arisa turn to Mana. "And you are the Chosenplayer? Hmph. I was expecting someone a bit...older. More responcible." Mana didn't like the elfess very much. She seriously had a grudge against humans. Why? Arisa and Eichiro started talking about the politics of the place, and Mana soon lost interest. The three walked though the corridors, Arisa and Eichiro talking, and Mana tagging along, looking at the artwork on the walls. They soon reached a room which looked like a shrine. Slabs of Carved marble were along the walls. Mana examined them. They showed art of a war, with elves and what looked like short humans. Dwarves, maybe? the next one showed a human playing a flute that looked very similar to hers. In fact, the human looked a lot like her...The next one showed the girl on a dragon fighting. Mana didn't really get the story, but maybe she would learn it later... Arisa suddenly turned to her and started asking her basic questions. What her name was, her age, how she came here...Mana told her about her flute. This caught her attention. "Mana, did you bring your flute with you today?" Mana reached into her pack and got out her flute. She handed it to Arisa, who studied it carefully. After a few minutes, she game it back to Mana. "Indeed, you're the one chosen to help us. Though i'm not sure why..." Mana didn't want to stay here any longer the she had to, and Eichiro seemed to notice, and asked if they were done. Arisa dismissed them, and the quickly made their way out of the castle. Eichiro looked like he had been bored and a bit uncomfortable too, so they both hurried to Taheiji. They both hopped onto his back wordlessly, and Taheiji took off. It wasn't until halfway back that someone finally spoke. "KaoruKasuga" "Exuse me?" "That was your mother's name. KaoruKasuga. But as I recall, she was more commonly called K.K." "How did you remember?" "Arisa and I were talking, and I'm not sure if you were paying attention, but if she's right, Your mother is living in Galbix right now." "Could we go? How far is it?" " It would take months to get there by foot." Mana's head and spirits drooped. They said nothing more until they were in Giaga again. A/n: Sorry I took so long, and sorry that it's so short! When the chapter is boring, you really don't want to write it. But I finally got it done! And the story will get more interesting now, and It'll be better! Promise!

Comments 
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   681889  
... I hate to bring this up but alot of this osunded like it came
from Eldest and Eragon...
-still though it's good! (And i know what you mean. I was trying to
write today but I kept walking off to read manga.)
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   432196  
It did?? I didn't mean it to...
 
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   972441  
it's fine, alot of people say the author of Eragon ripped stuff off
from J.R.R Tolkain
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   259216  
Who? I never heard of him. And besides, it's not like I'm publishing
this...
 
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   837279  
nah I didn't really mean it. it was just the whole painting thing

J.R.R tolakain wrote the Lord of The Rings...
 
MeepingMeep says:   2 September 2008   815642  
Yeah, i agree. the name GALBIX sounds a whole lot like GALBATORIX.
(or however it's spelled) But yeah, the hwole time I heard Eragon
being recited in the back of my head.The Lord of The Rings and Eragon?
No, not really. Not to me anyway. I found Eragon soooooooooooooo
boring it was impossible to finish.
 
MewMewSugar says:   2 September 2008   592174  
Kewl....I like it. Hope the next one comes out soon! ^^
‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   2 September 2008   719599  
It's okay that it took u a little time. if i was writing a story on
the internet with school and everything it would take me longer than
you to make one chapter!! :P
 
‹{☜☏☞}› says:   2 September 2008   382378  
Cool! very interesting!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   497894  
Kirti: really? I haven't read it yet...
meep: Ok, MAYBE Eragon helped me with names a bit... ._. But I'm
horrible at making names!!
Mew:will do :D
sera: Phew. I'm glad.
space:thanks :D
 
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   327487  
yeah I never agreed with the whole Eragon=Lord of the Rings thing
either but I've heard it alot. Same thing with Eragon and star wars.
(?!)

to be honest I think it's just other 15 year olds geting jealous
because all they'd acheived in 15 years was a new high score on Halo.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   747677  
I haven't seen or read lord of the rings, but I'm thinking of trying.
Eragon and star wars?? WTF??

lol xD Possibly.
 
MewMewSugar says:   4 September 2008   637935  
aw, I want a dragon. XD
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   4 September 2008   218887  
Don't we all xD
They're harder to draw then one would think. D:
 
Rin_Sohma whispers:   20 September 2008   824333  
yes, we all want Eragon- type dragons. (but our demision sucks and
doesn't have any left...)
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   20 September 2008   429913  
*star wars 3 moment* NOOOOOOOOOOOO
 
Kirti says:   21 September 2008   432189  
None... not a single one...
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   21 September 2008   774183  
NOOOO, I must bring one back to life!

I heard that a animal on Tasmania that was extinct, scientists have
found DNA, and they are trying to bring them back to life!

Maybe it'll work on dragons too...
 
Kirti says:   23 September 2008   543218  
le gaspio!

could it work??
They want to turn an Emu into a dinosuar so that they know how
dinosuars moved because they think that'll help determine why they
became extinct.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   23 September 2008   643133  
o.e
Never heard that before...that's kinda creepy.
but so is bringing extinct animals back to life.
 
Kirti says:   24 September 2008   983979  
I dunno. some people say it's "against Gods will" but can't he stop
us? or just make the experiment go wrong so that we just end up with a
plain ol' regular emu?

And I don't see why he would have a problem with life, as it was his
idea in the first place.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   25 September 2008   114754  
I'm glad you're looking at God's point of view :D

Well, I'm not sure. He has a plan for everything that'll happen in the
world, and I don't know what he'll decide for that poor Emu. D:
 
Kirti says:   5 October 2008   976851  
unless that emu is going to be THE CHOSEN EMU (zho my god, emu) and
it is meant to RISE ABOUVE regular emus. (lol)
 
Rin_Sohma says:   5 October 2008   486823  
what do you think of my new charactor? very camofluogy right? you can
hardly see me I'm so grey! 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   6 October 2008   655192  
OMG, you're like a ghost! 
 
Kirti says:   7 October 2008   139132  
Kirti: Rin? Rin?! Where'd you g-
Rin: BOO!
Kirti: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Rin: muhahahahaha!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   7 October 2008   386357  
HAHA XD
 

 
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