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Attempted SuicideCategory: poem
Wednesday, 18 April 2007
09:21:34 PM (GMT)
Attempted Suicide
Failed at life
No one is by my side
and I'm stuck here with the knife

Falling slowly
The pain I feel
Can't take anymore
The pain is so real

Attempted happiness
Failed even at that
I try to be happy
But how is that possible when you're always laughed at?

There's so much more to me 
You haven't seen
There's more than torture
From Cousin Dean.

Stealing,murder,crap like that
is what's tearing us apart
Continue and the world will be over
Where is your heart?

Feed the hungry
Save the hopeless
Shelter the homeless
Have a heart

Some have less
Some have more
We can all share
So let there be no war

Attempted Suicide
Falling faster
No one's by my side
I was that one disaster.

emo_4_ever says:   18 April 2007   817524  
i feel bad................that was a very mood changing poem.
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   18 April 2007   727267  
Um,I guess I'll say thanks.
Yeah,when people read my poems,it depressing most of 'em.
icantchangeme says:   18 April 2007   831519  
its not depressing to me,its exactly how i feel!! im always being
strong for eveyone else,and i think its time i just give in and let go
of this broken,and there is no trying to fix me now,i've
already shattered.
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   18 April 2007   564342  
Yeah,that's just how we are,I guess.
Fire_raina says:   18 April 2007   356573  
Wow, that was ....... deep. It was very good.
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   18 April 2007   984731  
Thank ya
‹XxXThe_RavenXxX› says:   19 April 2007   515655  
that was more than deep icantchangeme is right most people have been
strong for others but i mean its not fair that no one can be strong
for us u shaould realy publish that.
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   19 April 2007   251769  
Interesting thought,mail me sometime,you can give me some ideas!
hannahmontana43 says:   20 April 2007   782196  
wow you are very good at poems it is very deep
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   21 April 2007   564335  
Thank ya.
‹<3 Alison› cries:   25 September 2008   317354  
I agree with emo_4_ever
‹♩♫ Music Is My Heroin ♫ ♩› says:   2 November 2010   902620  
This is a very good poem, but the rhythm could use a little
improvement. It seems a little difficult to really read and feel some
parts because the rhythm is a bit off.
But other than that, this is a really good poem. 
lillymill says :   20 May 2011   487553  
that was a good poem  just dont do that though, because it would
just add even more un-needed sadness to the world 


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