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Tuesday, 18 June 2013
06:13:56 PM (GMT)
how cant you win

when theres nothing to lose?

how can these lies 

begin with whats true?

how can you envy

when you have it all?

how can you listen

but not hear the call?

how can you say

what you said was true?

when somehow already

youve found someone new.

how can you end 

the begining of a start?

how can you lend

someone your heart?

how can you be wrong

when nothing is right?

how could there be a sun

if theres no light?

how can you be you

if your not you with me?

how is this nightmare

considerd a dream?

what if "whats ifs" 

werent "whats ifs" in the end?

how simple would it be 

if whats broken could mend?

Comments 
Mistakes says:   18 June 2013   970777  
Here's a tip: don't be afraid to say, is not and can not, it helps
with the caidence which makes the poem better. 
Ex: how can there be a sun,
If there is no light?

Say both out loud with the poem and you'll see what I mean.
 
Skinny_Girl_love says :   18 June 2013   335100  
okay. thank you for the advice.
 

 
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