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Saturday, 4 December 2010
06:59:32 AM (GMT)

 My world had been shattered.

My father was dead. Now I would have to live with our paternal grandmother, who lived
far out in the country. She was a very nice woman, but, like Dad, refused to speak of
my mother.  Besides, she had only seen us a couple of times in our whole lives. She
was the one who brought us to Dad's funeral.

For everyone's sake, I stayed mature and calm, even though I was thirteen at the
time. I had to, no matter what - unlike Charlie, who wept freely, or Grandma, who was
lost in grief. Now I had to be the adult, and hide what was inside. This was one of
the worst parts - not only did I lose my great life and my great Dad, but I had to
watch my eight-year-old brother go through worse pain than me, and hide my emotions
for his sake. Someone had to be the comforter. My face was almost blank when all the
well-intentioned people gave me their condolences. 

But inside, I was broken.
But the funeral had been strange, too. Where the food was spread out as the guests
moved around in the rain, there stood a beautiful redheaded woman I had never seen
before, dressed in black. The woman saw Charlie, and dropped her umbrella to run and
hug him. Charlie seemed to trust this mysterious lady - his face crumpled, and he
buried it in her chest, weeping. She put a soothing hand on the back of his blonde
head, placing a gentle kiss on hiss forehead. Curious, I approached the pair who
clutched each other like people trying not to drown.
 "Hello...I don't believe we've met." I kept my tone casual as I addressed the woman.
She looked to me, her eyes a piercing cerulean - an even brighter blue than my own.
"Michelle!" She cried, as if I were a long-lost friend, and she pulled me into her
embrace, too. "Oh, I am so, so sorry." She whispered to me. Unsure of how to respond,
I hugged her back. Who was this woman? 

The beauty had only let us go when our grandmother came and told us it was time to
leave. We left, but when I turned around to catch another glimpse of her, she was

‹☢CAUTION!!☢› says:   4 December 2010   391726 I wish I could write like you! That was amazing!
‹.::SHINee♥Locket::.› says:   4 December 2010   842320  

I agree with Neoma, if I could write like you I wouldn't be so
jealous. You write about experiences nobody would dare to and I love
that of you xx
‹Tama_♦› says:   4 December 2010   261004  
Methinks she is your MOTHER, Michelle :D

Anyways, pretty story Shexia! It was so good it so few words! =)
‹❄Shexia: The Wintery Archer❄› says:   4 December 2010   652921  
 My gosh, thank you so much guys! 
‹.::SHINee♥Locket::.› says:   4 December 2010   432994  
You're welcome dear Shexia x *hugs* 
‹❄Shexia: The Wintery Archer❄› says:   4 December 2010   108527  
‹The Lark› says:   5 December 2010   679830  
That was pretty good.
‹❄Shexia: The Wintery Archer❄› says :   5 December 2010   372843  
 Thank you... 


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