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what did i do? (a poem)Category: someone help me!!
Monday, 4 June 2007
11:47:42 PM (GMT)
what did i do
to make you hurt me like this?
what did i do
to be ruined like this?
i dont know why it has to be me
what about my happy ending
i dont know why you cant see
all the pain you've caused me
i opened my heart
you tore it apart
you said you were sorry
and you tried to explain
i was blinded by your charm
you were only in this for personal gain
all i asked was why
you said its complicated
you underestimate me
and i just said,"try me"
the line went quiet
you didnt say a thing
i knew you would dent it
so now i sit here,and let the phone ring
you lied to me once...
shame on you
you lied to me twice...
and i still beleived you
you lied yet again..
and now i am confused
you kept up the lieing hoping i wouldnt figure it out
but im smarter than you think
i figured it all out
and now i wonder....
what did i do...
to deserve all this pain
what did i do..
to make you lie
what did i do..
to make you not want me
what did i do...
to deserve this taunting

all i have to ask is why,why,why.........

i personally like this one,and just to let everybody now,my poems are based on my
feelings,anywayz,let me know if you like it!!

Pyrowolf says:   5 June 2007   471473  
Very nice poem. There are a lot of strong words. I give it a thumbs
up. ^^
Supergirl121 says:   5 June 2007   867683  
Really nice poem.
did you got dumped recently or something?
moshimoshi_katie says:   5 June 2007   935519  
This is wonderful! ^-^ 
But I'm sad...
‹NeverShoutAmy™› says:   5 June 2007   718231  
yes supergirl121,i did.
msugirl98 says:   5 June 2007   195712  
this is feel! I give it 20 thumbs WAY up!
‹NeverShoutAmy™› says :   5 June 2007   233381  
thank you!!


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