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Rivers EndCategory: poems
Thursday, 5 April 2007
09:06:23 PM (GMT)
I splash around a river bend,
with nought a care in the world,
feeling the wind in my hair.
I fly past the trees,
and the small sandbanks,
using my oar to lever away from the sides.
all of a sudden, there is nothing below me,
and i soar, landing with a jolt.
my breath is gone, ripped right from my mouth.
i go even faster, going through rapids,
nearly crashing into the rocks,
spray wets my face, and i finally slow down,
coming to a stop in a lake.
the mountains are reflected in the calm waters,
and the eagles are flying hunting the fish.
i paddle to the middle, where my island rests,
and glide right past.
i continue down the river,
going even faster than before.
i go around a bend, and go straight down,
disappearing into the dark underground forever.

MrHello says:   5 April 2007   912661  
My goodness I lvoe this poem
KOTORgamegirl says:   5 April 2007   941287  
beautifulltbroken14 says:   5 April 2007   559225  
That is a really cool poem!
Oroborus21 says:   5 April 2007   334252  
wonderful Er, you captured a moment and really brought out the
excitement and magic of it. like a picture put into words. very good
job and very nice ending too...you have a great imagination and talent
KOTORgamegirl says :   6 April 2007   662181  


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