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Saturday, 21 April 2012
12:37:53 PM (GMT)
I look through blurry eyes, seeing only red,
Would the world really miss me?
Would I be better off dead?

It touches through the bandage, wrapped around my arm,
Does anyone even notice?
It doesn't do anyone else harm.

There is no pain, I feel only numb,
There's nowhere to hide now.
Nowhere to run.

When will it be over?  Why must I grow old?
I don't want it to happen.
So dreary and cold.

If I end it now, while I am young,
I'll die as I am,
No guilt traps sprung.

If I apologise now, I'll mean it when I can't speak,
For something I will do.
Inevitably,
For humans are weak.

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‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   232549  
Strange how we interpreted it similarly, just different points
of view! :o
This is really good!
 
‹defineMANIAC› says:   21 April 2012   977245  
@vanillatwilight 
Thanks.  Thought I'd make one rhyme ^^ 
 
‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   203062  
@TheScienceOfDeduction 
Rhyming is fun, but so hard Dx 
 
‹defineMANIAC› says:   21 April 2012   881160  
@vanillatwilight 
Yeah, and if you try to make something rhyme, it sounds forced and bad
D; 
 
‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   319218  
@TheScienceOfDeduction 
Exactly, so hard to make it fit Dx 
 
‹defineMANIAC› says:   21 April 2012   626878  
@vanillatwilight 
And make it sound natural, too!
Lol at the Related Entries....
Death
Death
Death
I hate him so much. 
 
‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   354259  
@TheScienceOfDeduction
So much emo xD 
 
‹defineMANIAC› says:   21 April 2012   882424  
@vanillatwilight 
Hehe... 
 
‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   380793  
@TheScienceOfDeduction 
Some people on here are even worse than us!! 
 
‹defineMANIAC› says:   21 April 2012   519187  
@vanillatwilight 
Nuuuuu!  We must try harder! 
 
‹mÿlö xÿlötö› says:   21 April 2012   480567  
@TheScienceOfDeduction 
EMO RAEGGGGGGG D8<
Your turn! I'm still writing mine though... 
 
‹defineMANIAC› says :   21 April 2012   685945  
@vanillatwilight 
Uhm....
Water ^^ 
 

 
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