Thursday, 1 February 2007
10:34:24 AM (GMT)
This a story i wrote long time ago and kept on adding paragraphs(ps: its not
finished i'll keep on adding parts) so here it is:
Walking toward my new school was always scary but to this one it was even scarier.
The two moulding were brown and grey with age while the door was huge and wooden, and
looked as though it would burst open by itself. Overall the school looked creepy but
somehow i managed to walk in and get to my locker. Just as i started opening it the
bell rang so i put all the unnessecary books in my locker hastily. As soon as i
turned around i was face to face with a boy with sandy blonde hair, green eyes,
freckles and braces.
"Hi, im Tony. Did I scare you, well actually i was intending to do that," he started
laughing. "Well tough luck with that, my names violet by the way" I smiled sweetly
."I think your in my class" tony said grabbing my hand and draggging me behind him to
our first class.
Upon arriving to the classroom the teacher gave me a nasty look and with a thick
french accent introduced me" Zis is Violet she iz avereh neu student".
As I sat down i noticed almost everyone had black hair and was pale. The lesson went
by really slowly and when the bell rang i was very eager to leave so i stood up too
quickly to rsult in a bloody finger. Everyone in the class shifted their attention to
me and my finger except Tony so I ran out but somone yanked me back.
"I'll take care of that" said a boy with black hair and blue eyes.
He took my finger ttowards his mouth. He started sucking on my finger with a look of
my pleasure on his face.
"Ow" i screamed pulling back my hand and walking away soon Tony was walking by my
"Is the cut bad?" he asked grinning.
"its okay" i said looking at it
"A kiss to make it better ?" he asked still crookadly grinning
"No its okay somone already kised it" i started laughing
However Tony looked at me seriously ."Listen Violet, you should know these teens are
dangerous, and plus you're a very pretty girl so keep your eyes open" Tony smiled at
the last comment i punched him playfully realizing we had come to a dead end.
tell me if i shuld continue