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Wednesday, 31 January 2007
06:17:30 AM (GMT)
I wrote this poem a few days back wen I was not goin well with someone. I din
proofread or re-read it-I just wrote on my own So overlook the mistakes in spelling
and rhyme.

It's called Phoenix of Imagination. Or Somewhere Only We Know

I tried to be perfect, but I am not worth it
I never meant to do those things to you,
But you don't  care anymore
In this crucial period, I wish you were here
Kissing me in your dream, Hugging the pillow
Holding me so tight in your arms so I can't go
Have we lost ourselves now?
But somewhere we'll live inside
Somewhere we'll live inside.

Life is hard without your touch; dreaming
Everyday and night, Crying
When I think about the time that are now past, Vindicated
Staring with wt eyes at the deserted memories through the misted
Pan of mirror of memoir, now is sorry the only thing we can say
I miss you so much, cuz in the end it's you
Whom I can cry to, In the times of grief, I could lean upon you

You were the sun to my sky,
Rainbow to the eternal horizon,
Only good thing in my life so rotten
Dreams of the mid-winter midnights,
The phoenix of my imagination, flying high....

There're smiles, tears and fights
But it's the memories that remain deep inside,
Why don't we evaluate something till it's gone
Shouting and screaming at each other all day long
There's someone beside you no matter what
Drowning in love, Sinking in remorse
We'll never get the meaning until it's lost.

I tried to be perfect, but nothing was worth it
Being Nititian in different planets,
I wish you were...Hugging the pillow
Holding you teddy bear so tight so your babe cant go,
Away from your touch, your love, so...
Tonight, why don't we go, somewhere only we know
This can't be the end of everything, we know
So tonights I cant wait to go
Somewhere only we know...
Somewhere only we know....

Comments 
punkpixie_10 says:   31 January 2007   442315  
Hloy Crap, this is amazing !!! Shoot, Better than my poem....Well
Keep up the good work and well only a few words were messed up.
aiden says:   31 January 2007   497892  
Yeah Im gonna edit 'em later on Thanks for your comment
 
BrieAnna says:   31 January 2007   941131  
nice.. i wish i could write poetry.
aiden says:   31 January 2007   553635  
You write them way better than me
 
BrieAnna says:   31 January 2007   215315  
yah right..
amortentia says:   2 February 2007   749358  
That was such a beautiful poem! That really was! I loved it!
Kaila says:   2 February 2007   449648  
OMG that was one of the most amazing things i have ever read! You
still need to write me one 
aiden says:   3 February 2007   976978  
Thank You :D
 
dropdeadgorguz95 says:   9 February 2007   391217  
OMG. That was so awesome and it really touched my heart you 
rock.

Can you write one about what you think about me??

PLZ

:-(
 
Emopinkie says:   8 May 2007   812642  
hiya aiden I just read ur poem and I think it is amazing. You are so
talanted. You shuld go into buisness*laughs* no really i love ur
inspiration
2ecio says :   3 September 2007   769648  
Great job matie
What was it about?

 
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