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a story idea!Category: (general)
Monday, 4 December 2006
11:54:11 PM (GMT)
some name 4 a guy:austin
some randome name 4 me:Mimi
        one day austine came over too my house too watch a romance novel.we sat
closely enjoying the movie as wind blew hard in my hair.i felt austins hands clasp
mine hard.i screamed as the wind picked up and my body began too feel weak.i felt a
sharp pain in my hips as my body was throne too the wall.i heard austine yell my name
but the world went balck.when i opened my eyes i screamed at the sight.my house was a
mess but i really screamed becuse of the image across the room.austine was spraled on
the floor.i leaned over his body as blood ran down his lip.i bured my face in his
chest as a tear ran down my cheek.his hand came slowley on my face.he told me it was
going too be fine,but he cried with me.
                           so what do u think?

Comments 
‹♥Star_Dust♥› says:   4 December 2006   162917  
who did this?
 
Natsu345 says:   5 December 2006   384681  
i did!
disposableteen says:   17 December 2006   153661  
were you both raped by the wind or something?
its good.

x|

-charlotte♥
Natsu345 says:   17 December 2006   774962  
weeli was blown 2 the wall and then fainted but austin was throed
around many times
PinkAngel95 says:   23 December 2006   519768  
Ok i dont want to be mean but thats surta dumb
Natsu345 says:   24 December 2006   693427  
yea i know but everyone has there own opinion.
i_love_shawn says:   3 January 2007   344559  
I like it.
Natsu345 says:   3 January 2007   725817  
Thanx!
brazilian1631 says:   4 January 2007   145669  
this sucks crap!!!)$&@%@#!)(&%#($)&^&@)(@)#(^)@*$)@#( 
Natsu345 says:   4 January 2007   445524  
Well thats ur opinion and u can say what u wish
fuzzyelmoo says:   12 January 2007   983115  
awww.... soo sad... did that occur to you randomly?
 
megan_12453 says :   29 October 2007   536295  
well...The truth....original....sad...a little dramatic.....but
really good

 
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