That's amazing. I understand how that feels like...........

this isn't 
bad at all! i like it,
Just the right
amount of deepness!
:DDDD

I really like your poem, it's very creative and opposing but in a
good way.

Aww, I liike itt! [:
What's been going onn? Wanna talkk?

Aww.
I likkke it. :DD

thats really good

its not particularly elegant but it conveys a lot of sentiment and
what you are feeling. this line seems clumsy and out of place:

How gossip said but not received is how you'd live your life with
ease

but your finishing is strong

keep working at them..some good stuff to build on

well ive never wrote poetry realy ever except like once for english
class im only 14 lol im not exactly a poet i was bored and wrote how i
felt and "how gossip said and not received " is saying you love to
spread it but when directed towards you you hate the worl wich ties it
too the last line...

i think you could drop that line and it would be better. but keep
writing, its all about getting out whats inside of you....thats what
its about and its great to do it.

but saying how u love to spread gossip but not redeive it then when
people talk about you and break this rule havoc follows so why drop it

Very good.
:]
If that all came from you yourself and just ur heart i think it is
excellent.
exactly how everything is.
Good job :]

cool lol XD XD XD XD XD very emotional and thoughtful to yo self

its not only myself

this is awesome