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Something I wroteCategory: Writings
Monday, 19 March 2007
05:40:03 AM (GMT)
Jagged Lines

Have you ever lain for hours
In your bed, trying to write
A beautiful poem that would describe
Exactly how you were feeling
At that exact point in time?
Then, you end up writing three
Lousy poems, or nothing at all,
Before you fall asleep...
Tomorrow could be better for you,
But maybe you were never meant
To be a poet...
Maybe that's why your poems
Turn out rough.
You read back through your poetry book
And realize it's worthless,
Romantic nothingness,
And that you have the artistic talent of a flea.
These poems were only meant to soothe your soul
And nobody elses.
Will you quit writing
Because of this fact?
Of course not!
(Even though you probably should...) 
Because, even if you're never
Going to share it with another soul,
Pouring your heart out in a poem or a song
Feels better than keeping those feelings inside.
Even though your work is filled with
The most embarassing admissions
You've ever read,
They bring back memories
That warm your heart
On a lonely,
Sleepless,
Hopeless night.-----------
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I saw my guy tonite. I'm so "in love" with him. I can't say that I'm definitely IN
LOVE... Therefore, I put it in quotations. 
I guess I should just say I really like him. I just don't feel like I need to get so
involved with him, when he doesn't even know.
So... Yeah. Have a great nite everyone.

Comments 
MoonlitTearsGabriella says :   20 March 2007   268571  
This is really excellent! It has a subtext to it...not only can you
not write a poem that captures how you feel, you are afraid if you
write the poem and it doesn't represent your exact feelings, then you
have failed. It has many meanings...and I'd like to hear more of your
poetry! Can you write me sometime? xD

 
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