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The Vampire StoryCategory: Aurora's side
Friday, 26 December 2008
09:19:44 PM (GMT)
Once upon a time there was a girl named Aurora. She had a hard life, few friends,a
horrible parent, "nothing to live for" as she would write in her dark diary. When she
came from school, later then usual, her Father came to the door and stared at her.
"Where the hell have you been??" the father screamed. Aurora answered,"I was hanging
with Brandon.." Before she could say anymore her father slapped her face and yelled,"
you will not come home that late and you will not see Brandon ever again!" Aurora ran
up to her room crying and slammed the door. " He will never understand ever! He needs
to know that im happy around him!'' She looked through the strip of light through her
window and prayed ," Dear God, please let me finally get out of the hands of this man
so called my Father...Please please. I'll do anything..please!" 
    She looked under her bed and garbed her diary. Wrote a note and left it on the
bed for her father to see. Please don't be mad. Aurora climbed out her window and
snuck out to the road. "I need to..to....just...die!" A mysterious voice came from
the darkness, "you shouldn't be out late..there are creatures out here!" Aurora
jumped from the voice, " Hello?? who was that....*pause* show your self!" The
mysterious man came from behind Aurora and covered her eyes. The man had dark black
hair, icy blue eyes, and a soft voice. "Come now, dont be sad!" Aurora was crying
through the cracks of this man's fingers. Please..dont...hurt...me. {you can hardly
hear her when she cried those words}
    Mean while, Aurora's door slammed opened and her father came in. "Aurora!!! Where
are you!!!" This mas glanced of to her mirror and saw her note. "huh??" He wondered
what was inside. As he read he started to tear, the note he held said,"Dear Father,
You have treated me poorly and i have decided to run away for a while....Don't bother
searching for me because you are better of with out a mistake in your life. All the
times you have hit me have told me that you didn't care." As he read he saw tear drop
on the paper...not just one but many more. He kept reading, "I have found someone in
my life whom i love with all the little shattered pieces of my heart. You need to
know I'm finally happy. But now i have nothing to live for. Please forgive me as i
plummet over the bridge and die.....I did it for you" The father just stopped reading
there covered his mouth and screamed! "Im so sorry I love you Aurora!
    Back with Aurora~ "Please let me go!!", Aurora balled out when she struggled to
run away. The man let her go and plainly said goodbye. As soon as Aurora turned
around she noticed that the man was gone! "Oh well" she stated. As aurora walked she
got to a strange grave yard. Aurora quietly said,"Sad isn't it..." As she looked
around she heard drunken laughter...Aurora hid and as soon as she moved she feel on
her knees frozen to the ground. "Ugghhhnn come on Aurora Run!!," she said to herself.
The drunken man spotted her and said, "Hey pretty lady wanna have some fun??" The man
went up to her and took her head and pointed it towards him. the drunk man said, "Ohh
i got a lucky beauty!!" He let go of her head and stared to lean in for a kiss.
Aurora screamed to the top of her lungs, "HELP ME SOMEONE!!!!" After the screams of
mercy she tried to get up and run. "Come back, the drunk man said," dont you want
some fun???" She ran away crying and holding her heart. 
   She finally got far away and then she stopped. "What am i to do now??" She looked
around and saw a bridge. "Maybe no one will miss me...." She darted towards the
bridge edge and just stood there looking at the rapid river thinking of jumping.
"NNNOOO Aurora don't do it!" The body of the voice grabbed her hand and dragged her
away. He awaited for Aurora's to talk. After the long pause Aurora finally said," How
did you know my name? How did you know were i was??" The man finally said," You don't
remember me? How could you not??" The man smiled and all he could see were sharp
vampire teeth. Aurora gasped in fear then finally said in shock," Brandon?!?! You're
a vampire? But how...i mean...how?" Brandon finally grabbed her and whispered in her
ear, " I would miss you.....I love you....Will you be with me forever??" There were
tears traveling down Aurora's powdered white face. Aurora said in a soft tone,"
Always and forever.." Brandon bit Aurora and said that this is what I want you to
feel like forever.
   When Brandon bit Aurora she ended up saying i love you and passing out. Brandon
put her on his shoulders and walked to her house. The father came running out and saw
them together. The father screamed," Brandon take you----never mind" Brandon stood
there with a firm look and walked in to her room. Brandon laid her down and said," im
so sorry but i have to go...I love you...I promise i will come back!" As he heard the
father come up stairs he kissed Aurora's lips and jumped out the window in to the
darkness. The father came up saying, "Brandon....what where is he?" He looked at
Aurora and said I always loved you...no matter what...im so so sorry."


~*To Be Continued*~

Comments 
‹MayaLOVESFAME› says:   26 December 2008   699964  
It's a nice intresting story.
Is this suppose to be king of like twilight?
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   971976  
No i dont like twilight so
i didnt intend it to be like that!

I'll message you when the next one comes okay!
 
‹MayaLOVESFAME› says:   26 December 2008   713927  
*kind
 
‹MayaLOVESFAME› says:   26 December 2008   336224  
‹Aurora du Coudray› :ok thank yew
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   361888  
you are welcome
the next on is in Brandon's veiw!
tell me honestly how did you like it??
 
‹~SlowlyDying~› says:   26 December 2008   691253  
That was really good.
Truely....
I wish my own story ended so nicely.
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   857286  
well thank you

aww im sorry...
 
‹3 __ fag nuggets› says:   26 December 2008   181748  
Heeey,
This is good =) 
You should check out my story,
It may not be your style.
But i need a good writers opinion. 

I like writing romance & horror,
The horror style i write is usually about ghosts.
and the romance is usually about teen love and high school.
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   662222  
okay i would love to read it!
thank you

and the next story i changed my mind is still Aurora as the main
character okay!
 
lildeidaragirl says:   26 December 2008   334279  
woah cool cant wait for part 2
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   585955  
thanks!
 
‹CapturedRuins™› says:   26 December 2008   364113  
Oh i like the plot and the idea of the story well done!
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   26 December 2008   891677  
thank you very much!
 
‹...♥isthislove?› says:   26 December 2008   871131  
i quite liked it,
it moved on quite fast,
but still very good ^^
xoxo 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   27 December 2008   434896  
okay
i'll make sure it goes by slower okay!
thank you
 
‹█bLaZiNg☺DuCk☺fAcE☺DaRyN█› says:   27 December 2008   753978  
awesomenesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesese
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seseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseseses
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   27 December 2008   551692  
thank you!
 
‹<$Heartz4romJesse<3› says:   4 January 2009   687786  
nice, i didn't watch twilight but this is good
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says:   4 January 2009   362225  
This isnt Twilight!
 
‹I_WILL_EAT_YOU_NO_MATTER_WHAT› says:   17 January 2009   147664  
MAKE ANOTHER RIGHT NOW! (i'm aurora's dad XD plus your display name
is aurora) *whips* XD JK but it's been long :/
 
‹Aurora du Coudray› says :   21 January 2009   252175  
OKAY!!!
but...wait 2marrow im sleepy, my dad is almost home, and homework!
i need ideas!!!
i know that the names are the same cause i love that name!!!
 

 
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