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My poem.Category: Creativity.
Sunday, 4 November 2007
05:38:45 AM (GMT)
This is MY poem.
That I wrote.
So dont steal it, K?

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She walked out of the room.
Into the cold, dry, and dark land.
She felt her self shiver.
Her tears rolled down just like quick sand.

She found a wall to lean.
Her back went against the moist wall.
She wanted to sit down.
But stayed standing up very tall.

She had a few Tissues.
She reached the tissue to her eyes.
And wiped away her tears.
"I am way too lonely she sighs"

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WO.
That was my poem.
For school.
It was suppose to be about sadness.
Like it?
Comment?
Please?

Comments 
Rielly says:   4 November 2007   799572  
wow. thats great. very intense
babymodz says:   4 November 2007   923642  
aaww... touching poem yeah its so is sad... great job!! : )
popular says:   4 November 2007   518224  
Thanks, hunn
Heavens_Angel_With_Wings says:   4 November 2007   418816  
One word: Fabulus!

Welldone. Vry touching, vry good!

I giv it a *****! (5 stars!)
popular says:   4 November 2007   767735  
Thanks, hun!
That means alot.
Now lets just hope my teacher feels the same way.
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   4 November 2007   769971  
Thats absolutely posolutely great Jamie!
I love it dahling
 
popular says :   4 November 2007   111333  
Thanks, hun!
You rock.

 
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