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My poem.Category: Creativity.
Sunday, 4 November 2007
01:38:45 AM (GMT)
This is MY poem.
That I wrote.
So dont steal it, K?


She walked out of the room.
Into the cold, dry, and dark land.
She felt her self shiver.
Her tears rolled down just like quick sand.

She found a wall to lean.
Her back went against the moist wall.
She wanted to sit down.
But stayed standing up very tall.

She had a few Tissues.
She reached the tissue to her eyes.
And wiped away her tears.
"I am way too lonely she sighs"


That was my poem.
For school.
It was suppose to be about sadness.
Like it?

Rielly says:   4 November 2007   799572  
wow. thats great. very intense
babymodz says:   4 November 2007   923642  
aaww... touching poem yeah its so is sad... great job!! : )
popular says:   4 November 2007   518224  
Thanks, hunn
Heavens_Angel_With_Wings says:   4 November 2007   418816  
One word: Fabulus!

Welldone. Vry touching, vry good!

I giv it a *****! (5 stars!)
popular says:   4 November 2007   767735  
Thanks, hun!
That means alot.
Now lets just hope my teacher feels the same way.
‹medusaaaa🍪› says:   4 November 2007   769971  
Thats absolutely posolutely great Jamie!
I love it dahling
popular says :   4 November 2007   111333  
Thanks, hun!
You rock.


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