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Sunday, 1 April 2007
05:54:24 PM (GMT)
This was going to take quite some skill, which she wasn’t sure she had and she
probably didn’t have. Since she only had two years of training in the first place.
She still couldn’t believe that her village would send her after the demons and
protect the warriors! Can’t the warriors protect themselves? Well then my master
would reply
“ I have faith in you, young Suzume”, right, I would think to myself. 
You know just cut the crap, I am getting so tired of everyone telling me that!
She looked up just in time to see a flaming branch of the tree that she was nestled
up to, plummeting towards the earth. It was quite a large branch, which would knock
her out good if she didn’t move soon. But if she moved, the demon would surly spot
her and send out another fiery blast of crimson fire towards her. She had made her
choice; she dodged the flaming branch just in time. When the branch hit the ground a
mushroom cloud covered the forest, sending smoke everywhere. Suzume was now having a
coughing fit from the smoke as the cloud slowly engulfed her. She finally had given
away her position to the demon. It could smell her fear. She did a running
summersault to a tree that was not in the mushroom cloud yet. In the confusion Suzume
just stood there, the tree shielding her from the world. She sheathed her sward
thinking that the beast retreated, but she was wrong! When she had sheathed her
sward, it made a sliding noise. Since it was almost completely quiet and a noise such
as that could be heard from all around the dense forest. 

If you have any inprovenments that you think i should make please tell me. Also
comment if you want me to wright more!!

‹Ester of the Dimensions› says:   19 April 2007   238585  
Write more! Just remember sword not sward
marjan says :   20 April 2007   126396  
ok... thanks. thats all?


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