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Wednesday, 11 February 2009
02:43:04 PM (GMT)
The Rain    By: James Harlan

                   It touches and it feels so cold, every single, drop so bold.
                        I feel the wet on my skin, as the wind blows it in.
                        All the way, down to the bone, I feel that I am all alone.
             The rain makes me think a thought, one that I thought Id forgot.
                   Now I realize deep inside, there are feelings I cant hide.

                                     Pain     By:James Harlan

                                   It burns, It slices, It chops and dices,
                                   It freezes, it comes in breezes.
                                   But, even if I try to hide, it will find whats
                                   The hurt, the mar, or the damage, it is there
without a bandage.
		           Deep inside I will survive, but I wonder, Why am I alive.

‹Beth;ICan;Make;You;Believe;In;Love&&;Sex&&;Magic› says:   11 February 2009   412858  
On the first one you could have not put The rain as the title.
& Make people guess what it is :].

Overall Quite good (y)
‹RainbowRains› says :   11 February 2009   591612  
Thank you for the constructive critiscism NEVER DO IT AGAIN!!!  no
i'm just kidding thank you a lot


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