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the little orphan chapter 15Category: The little orphan story
Saturday, 2 August 2008
08:49:43 PM (GMT)
the group spent the rest of the day traveling to the village, Which Eichiro said was called Giaga. Mana wanted to ask Him about everything that has happened, from his imprisenment to what happened in the temple. She was dying to know just what was behind his bright green eyes... And she had a feeling Eichiro knew what was behind her deep blue eyes. She tryed to ask him, but he remained silent. Mana soon got frusterated and gave up. But there was something about Eichiro that wasn't normal. By evening,they could see the village. It wasn't like New York City or Calgary, but it was still pretty big. Eichiro said they would rest for the night and go into town tomorrow. Everyone settled down and fell asleep. Everyone exept Mana. Instead, when she was sure everyone was asleep, she let Spirit out of her pack. She stretched and yawned. She didn't look like she was very comfortable. "Do I have to stay with your stuff? It's cramped in there." "Well, where else can you go?" "Don't these 'back pack' things have a side pocket?" Spirit was right. On the side of her pack, was a side pocket meant for a waterbottle, but would suit Spirit. "Alright, But don't complain later." "OK! Thanks! G'night!" Spirit hopped in and got herself comfortable. Mana felt like a mother. She wasn't sure if that was a bad thing or not. She had to get some sleep, but ended up staying up before she did. * Mana was shooken awake by Eichiro. She sat up and stretched. She was having a more peaceful sleep then usual... as she slipped on her pack, she realised her sleeve had rolled up, showing some of the crest from the sprites. She yanked the sleeve over it. She looked around to see anyone noticed.Nobody seemed to, so she let out a sigh of relief, and followed them into the village. Everything looked like it came from nature. The buildings looked more like huts. Mana was more suprised to see the villagers were elves. Males looked fit, but not healthy. They must have been going through hard times. The females looked the same. Both genders were slightly taller then Humans of the same age, and had long ears. The elves stared at the group, with faces of awe and a little exitement. A few of the elves looked like they were on the verge of death. when they got to the center of Giaga, the came across another elf that stood out in the crown. This elf was a male, but had blonde hair go down past his shoulders. He looked much more healthy then the other elves. He was garbed in a tunic of gold and red. He quickly noticed the group, and his face brightened when he saw Eichiro. "Eichiro, is that you? After all these years?" "It's only been four years, Etsuya." "It seemed like much longer. When you went missing, everyone thought that you had been captured by Shikuro." "Well, i was, kinda..." Mana tried to understand his story, but had some difficulty. "And you brought friends?" Etsuya looked behind him at the group. He stopped at Mana, who was standing beside Eichiro. He gave a face of shock for a brief moment, but quickly hid it. "well...welcome back, Eichiro." * Etsuya invided the group to stay at his hut until they left Giaga. In many ways, his hut was not different from a normal house. It had all the same rooms, exept everything was from nature. Mana wandered into the living room. everything was from nature, as the rest of the house. Only one thing looked unnatual. It was a vase being used as a fishbowl for a Koi. The vase had a ring of smoke encircling it, like saturn had it's rings. Mana had always been fasinated by Koi. Eichiro introdiced the group. "I have other guests staying here as well. A warloc and his student." A warloc! A master of magic! Mana was now certain that this world had anything she or anyone else could possibly imagine. "Where are they?" "You already met Fishi." He said, pointing to the Koi. Was that koi a warlock? "What? That's a fish!" "Not just a fish, Mana." every head turned to the fish, who looked like it was smiling. The vase it was in started to hover over the table it was on, and floated to the group, at eye level. "Why do you stare? Is it because I am different then you?" Nobody knew how to answer. "I'm not different. I only lookdifferent." She swam a circle in his bowl to face a corridor. "My student! Come out of your room, and greet our guests!" There came a clamour of objects crashing together, then a girl Shiki's age came out of the door. She had bright pink hair and a simple dress, Which Mana assumed was custom for trainees in Magic. She carried a thin stick, which Mana detirmined was her wand. The most pecurlier thing about her was that two cat ears poked out of her head. If she had blonde hair and lost the ears, She could be Shiki's twin sister! "This is Hiki, My student and assistant." Shiki and Hiki had almost the exact same name! could they be related? Mana could only wonder. She noticed that Etsuya was staring at her the whole time with a hard glace. Mana felt self-consious and tryed to hide behind her shoulders. Etsuya suddenly dashed at Mana, and grabbed her right arm in a painful position, bending it backwards. Any movement she made would make it hurt. Everyone stared at him, wide-eyed and Jaw-dropped, including Fishi and his assistant. "Mana, do you keep secrets from your friends?" He pulled back her sleeve to show the whole crest. All the eyes went to Mana. Eichiro looked like he was violated. Mana would do anything to dissapear right then. "And what's this?" Etsuya reached into her waterbottle pocket, and pulled out Spirit, Who was screaming and struggling to get free of his grip. He let Mana go, and she got a good distance away from him. She wasn't sure if they were all staring at her for what she did, or just the chock of having them. "How did you know?" "I'm the top magic trainer in Giaga, apart from Fishi. Nothing gets by me without me knowing." Mana didn't know what to think. She needed to get away from them, to think and clear her mind. She rushed out the front door, suprising the group. She could hear Eichiro call her name behind her. She didn't want to be with Eichiro. Or anyone else. She just wanted to be with her thoughts. She ran out of Giaga and into the forest until she was sure Eichiro was long gone. A/n: Sorry I took so long on this chapter! I procrastinated, and halfway through copying, i clicked on a link and had to start all over again! T.T but it's finally up! Enjoy! :D

Kirti says:   2 August 2008   392732  
whoa. (more long lost siblings?! across worlds?!)
Shiki... Hiki...
bad Mana, bad!
but yaaaaaaaaaay it's awesome!
Kirti says:   2 August 2008   242682  
heh heh... Fishi...
MeepingMeep says:   2 August 2008   566484  
EEEE!!!! Fishi!!!! Yay! I procastinate...... a lot.... LOL
callie11 says:   2 August 2008   596863  
Procrastinators shall rule the world...tomorrow...

Anyways, a pretty good chapter!
‹SqueeneyTodd› says:   3 August 2008   153912  
I am a fellow procrastinator! YAY! Fishi!
‹{☜☏☞}› says:   3 August 2008   782251  

I don't know what to say... It's one of the BEST story I've read in my
‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   3 August 2008   169151  
That was cool  it's ok that u procroatinated. Cant wait to see what
happens next! 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   3 August 2008   983838  
Kirti: bad mana. No keeping secrets from your friends
meep: it's a favorite hobby of mine
callie: they shall :D
anime: we shall take over the world :D
space:really? that makes me feel so good! :D
sara: ok, i be workin on chapter 16 
I can't believe all the comments i've gotten.
i'm suprised i even got this far in the story. 
i usually lose interest about this time of pruduction.
‹Ashe_Amu› says:   3 August 2008   419566  
awsomeness!i like it!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   3 August 2008   161266  
thank you 
Kirti says:   3 August 2008   546793  
No! no losing intrest! losing intrest bad!

hurray for procrastinating!
it's a whole Procrasti Nation!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   4 August 2008   488739  
but i'm not procrastinating with chapter 16.
well, i've alredy got a bit done.


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