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Sunday, 11 February 2007
02:15:21 PM (GMT)
Jimmy was briefly aware of being upside down. He felt his forehead pressing against
a door armrest and tried to grab something to steady himself. The screech of rock
scraping metal assaulted his ears, and he could feel the car strike a tree, snapping
off branches with cracks like rifle shots. Then the car flipped outaward from a ledge
and landed upright on the floor of the ravine, with a final jarring wallop that shook
every bone of Jimmy's body. Still dazed from the impact, Jimmy's bewildered mind
replayed the initial scene of the crash. He was to go over that scene hundreds of
times in the next couple of weeks. What always surprised him was how long the action
seemed to take: the dramatic appearance of the deer as the headlights picked the
animal out cleanly against the dark brush and trees of the forest; that slow, arching
leap as the deer semingly took wing and floated over the on rushing car; the delicate
beaty of the four legs tucked up into the white fur of the animal's belly; the
thudding crack of hooves on the road as the deer landed. The whole scene couldn't
have lasted mroe than two or three seconds, yet it seemed to unroll at its own slow
motion speed that had nothing to do with real time. And through all of this he had
been aware of the car's relentless skid toward the edge of the ravine.


                              To be continued................

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Horse007 says :   15 February 2007   326773  
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