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Sunday, 28 January 2007
09:04:24 PM (GMT)
This isn't true, if you dont like stories dont read.
This is about a bisexual girl, who changed hetrosexual.
And her  life that was upside down..

Here's goes.

Razz was looking out a window, her long brown hair tied into a ponytail.
She was washing the dishes in her dorm.
Razz was humming a song, when the door opened.
Breanna came in with foods, I looked up and just amazingly watched her.
She was beautiful, she brushed her hair back, put the food on the counter.
"I'm back from shopping" Breanna smiled.
"Damn, she's gorgeous." I thought, the quickly looked up and smiled.
But, I slipped my hand hitted a knife and my hnd started to bleed.

I ran to the bathroom lay it under warm water, and whimpered.
I cleaned up my wound and wrapped it in bandages.
Breanna, came in to check on me.
"Are you ok?" She scared razz,
as Razz fell and hit the floor. Breanna gasped and helped her up.
I'm sorry I didn't mean to startled you.
"It's okay, im always falling everywhere." I moaned as my body ache.
Her skin was so soft, she didnt want breanna to let go.

"I'm going to the park, i'll be back later."
I had to leave the house, I was falling everywhere when i see her.
I walked down the path, and sat on a bench and started to write in 
my green furry notebook. A boy sat beside me, and looked over to see what i was
"Your pretty good at that, you ought become a song writer."
I looked up and smiled.
"Thanks" I said.
He was gorgeous, he had black hair with red bangs.
His body was amazing, skinny and strong.
I handed the book to him as he read it.
He caught me looking down and sad.
He asked what was wrong.

Chapter Two will come out if I get some comments and feedbacks.

kurai says:   28 January 2007   868378  
It was ok...


Why is this written in stanza mode??
is it supposed to be a poem??
CarCrashx says:   28 January 2007   789546  
Im not good with paragraphs, so um its like supposed to be a story.
candyfloss27 says:   28 January 2007   397761  
Cool story. i beg you to write more.
anaxesanamoon says:   6 February 2007   574627  
plezzzz make more!!!
kagra says :   16 April 2007   873916  
cool i want to hear the rest plz


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