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Kirti's Mind TheaterCategory: The Little Orphan
Tuesday, 2 September 2008
02:52:01 AM (GMT)
All credit goes to Miss_RolePlay1995. Characters plot setting, blah blah blah... her
story not mine, she's the genius I' the fan girl whoes guessing where the story is
Kirti's concoince says:don't be mean, it's not they're fault you need to write a
Kirti says:yeah, it's yours, you bug me if I don't.
Kirti's concoince responds:humph! don't get sniffy at me. Your just not an
evening person. (You're not even awake in the mornings)
Kirti says: Am too!
Kirti's know-it-all-conciouce says: fine it's PMS then.
Kirti: grrr!
concioence:oh you know I'm right. come to think of it isn't that time? haha snippy
girl you have to deal with that when school starts! nananananna *raspberry*

okay I just hog tied my concience. Roll Kirti's mind theater. *faulty projecter
blinks then starts counting backward onto an old sheet*. (I gotta get new
-btw what do you think of my oh-so-special comedic opening? impressive no?-
Zoh my god this one has a title! (the last one didn't...I think the first one

Strange Couples
Ato gently pulls his love behind the bushes so the others couldn't see them. He
leaned down close to her. "We have to talk" he breathed, ruffeling her hair slightly.
Hiki looked up at him, blinking as her eyes ajusted to the light cast by the qauter
moon. "Ato.." she whispered, fearing that he had noticed her longing, and wanted to
disper her before she really lost control. But it was too late: She loved him. Ato
hesitated wondering where to begin. "I- I've seen you looking at me Hiki!" he burst
out, still managing to keep his voice low. Hiki gulped- This wasn't going well. He
knew. He wanted to tell her to buzz off and couldn't bear to hurt her.
   Ato heard her gulp. oh no, he thought, she knows what I'm going to say and doesn't
like me back! Hiki took a breath and Ato winced. Hiki saw it and hesitated, but
worked up the courage to confess anyway. "I r-really like you Ato. I guess I
shouldn't have stared like that, I never meant t-to make you uncomfortable." Ato
   Oh dear! thought Hiki. I've made this harder for him haven't I? I'll just leave.
Ato saw her turn and grabed her shoulder "The only reason I saw you," he said
quiently "is because I was staring at you too." Hiki stared. "I love you Hiki" he
said. Hiki stared. And for the longest time staring was enough. And then gently,
nervously, Hiki kissed him on the cheek. And hesitantly, Ato put his arms around her.
As the lovers embraced Hiki rested her head on his shoulder.
   For then at least, all was well.
Last edited: 2 March 2009

‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   786963  
Ato and Hiki? Didn't see that coming...
I actually had another idea for who Ato would be with...but good job
anyways :D
If you want me to tell you who, you'll just have to wait for later in
the story! :D
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   564299  
Oh BTW, I will write you a cheque to buy new equiptment :D
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   239823  
heheh, thanks. (maybe I can get a new sheet!)
-I don't need to know know now. I was just going on the whole oppisits
attract thing. little clumsy Hiki ("clumsy" meaning she turned her
mentor into a fish...) versus strong, refined Ato (well you have to be
to survive as a theif).

but like I said, I'm just guessing. it could just have easily been
Takuya and Mikan I wrote about. (actually I'd been thinking about
doing that...)
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   264113  
D: Wrong again... xD
But I guess it makes sense you'd think that, since you aren't me, and
you don't know... but I'll probably use these ideas somewhere in the
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   819894  
piish, no worries. this one was just for fun. no serious ideas

Naono's was because I really think something like could happen, and
Niana's was because I wondered how she'd come in. (I was just tossing
one idea around.)
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   385885  
lol, that's good to fiddle with it. Even now, i'm not completely sure
how the story will exactly turn out. I know where it's going and where
it'll end, but i'm not sure exactly how to get to it...<--sound
although I have a few key elements that'll make the readers want more
(something unbelieveable like, in Eldest, Murtagth was evil, I totally
wigged out at that and now I'm dying for the third one to come out!)
oh yeah, you're an evil genius in storywriting :D
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   251894  
I'm evil??????
yes that's very familiar, don't fall victime to it!<--victime to it.

to late, we're already hanging on your every word.
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   245588  
don't hang on too hard, because when something bad happens, they're
going to go after me xD
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   826357  
we're hanging on your every word and when something shocking and bad
happens we'll fall off. we'll wake up on the ground very dizzy saying
"nnnngh... what happend?" then we'll remember and pass out. and when
we wake up again we will start climbing and on your every word again.
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   824524  
I'm only going to get more crowded from here on out? Greeeeat.
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   217463  
only your dedicated fans hang on your every word. (thats only... a
few dozen... wow your being crowded... well I have like 2 readers so
don't whine because I asked you to read it...)
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 September 2008   766566  
A few dozen is like,24... I don't know how many fans I have...But my
fanbase is only going to grow from here on out...Is that good or bad?
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   193844  
Kirti says:   2 September 2008   766377  
i have like two readers plus this one guy who read chapter one but
dind't even comment. having lots is good. very good.

be happy.   
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   10 September 2008   789497  

I have lots of people who only commented on chapter one, and didn't
bother looking at the other chapters. I hate when they do that D:


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