Friday, 4 July 2008
03:51:13 PM (GMT)
I recently did some GCSE practise thing in english, and my favourite lesson is
english (you may laugh if you like)
so im really proud!
She kept me behind after the lesson and said that there was one part of my story that
really got to her and made her want to read on, but unfortionatly it was the end of
my story, it went like this (the bit that got to her) ....
"i saw darkness, nothing but darkness, i would have killed to see just a crumb of
bread or just somthing as simple as a pea, i was so hungry.
Suddenly, out of knowhere, a light shon and i felt as light as a feather, i no-longer
felt starved, just like a feather.
I began to move without realising through the light, was i in heaven? or was it just
sorry about the bad spelling...
i love writing so much!
so they'll be alot of these diary enteries =]