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painCategory: poem
Saturday, 7 April 2007
11:05:09 PM (GMT)
My soul drowns in this ocean of solitude.
Alone, in my misery
I wait for the comfort I've longed for all this time.

I lay down dying,
suffocating in agony in this sea of miserable bliss.

As I close my eyes one last time,
I see a hand reach down.

I pull away.
No longer trusting.
No longer giving the second chance.
My eyes are shut
I do not see his face.

He lays down beside my almost still body
engulfing it in the warmth of trust 
as he embraces me.

There we lay
on the bottom of the trench.
As I open my eyes he leaves,
I stand only to see him walk away.

My unknown savior lets me live a no longer empty life.
I rest again peacefully.
Knowing someone cares.

I wake up.
Alone again at the bottom of this unforgiving world.

I was just a dream...

Comments 
‹Captain Sodomy› says:   9 April 2007   929481  
wow that was deep.
 
AustinDavis says:   10 April 2007   219564  
yeah i know it was
katara005 says :   25 May 2007   678854  
thats really good!

 
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