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Monday, 9 January 2012
11:34:04 PM (GMT)
The weakest of the weak
feed on fear.
Do you have a plan for me, too?
I already know of the destruction you seek,
and the end is always near.
I won't fear you.

I've read your lies like a bible,
every word a bloody promise.
There's more to heaven than pleasure,
more to hell than simple consequence. 

When I'm emaciated,
skin and bones,
when I have more stitches than skin,
when I never sleep,
never eat, will you be satisfied then?
I won't give in.

If I resent compassion,
if I'm up to my eyes in apathy,
if I drown out all passion,
if I suffer and burn,
will you all laugh at me?

You've taught me death,
you've taught me hate,
for years I've been your prisoner,
this is my escape.

CopyKat says:   9 January 2012   918400  
Damn gurrrrl, you're a good writer, I think :D
‹jesus_of_suburbia› says:   10 January 2012   800158  
PLease, please, please put that wonderful song to good use and post
it on a horse slaughter wbsite. It's absoloutley perfect because thats
what the horses go through.
‹✖[[AntisocialButterfly]]✖› says:   11 January 2012   889906  

I don't think that's exactly what horses go through.... But, I could
write one about that. I've written anti-animal-cruelty things before. 
‹jesus_of_suburbia› says:   11 January 2012   982142  
It will work on any animal cruelty website.
north says:   11 January 2012   334840  
Give her a break.. she needs it. c:

This is GREAT.
I've been reading your stuff for a long time, and this is my favorite.
(: Shows talent. 
‹✖[[AntisocialButterfly]]✖› says:   11 January 2012   365382  

You really like it? I'm a little surprised, when I wrote it I was
tired and the rhymes don't line up quite right; and I'm also kind of
surprised you've been reading my poems, but I'll just say: Thank you.
north says:   11 January 2012   797169  
Not saying it's perfect.

But I like the imagery.
Very few of us can write with images. 
‹✖[[AntisocialButterfly]]✖› says :   11 January 2012   350511  

Oh. Well, thank you. I love "images" in poetry, without them it's just
meaningless words. Right? 

*The way to write good stories is to make them paint a picture.
*The way to create good art is to make is tell a story. 
*The way to write good poetry to make it tell a story and paint a

You should read my new one, too.  


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