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Friday, 27 November 2009
07:21:30 AM (GMT)
Chapter 1

"I hate you!" was the response Caitlyn, my older sister, gave my mom told her she
couldn't go to the prom. I don't even see why people even want to go to the prom.
It's just a bunch of dancing and crap. My sister says I'll be interested in proms
when I'm 15. Yeah right. My name is Megan. I'm 11 years old and I live with my
parents, my sweet puppy Sugar, and my bratty,annoying older sister Caitlyn. Caitlyn
stormed off and went up to her beautiful bedroom. It is one of the loveliest bedrooms
you'll ever see. I ran upstairs to her room and knocked on her door. "Sis? Are you
ok?" No answer. Just soft sobbing. I tried the door handle, but it was locked.
Luckily, I knew where she hid the spare key. I walked to her bathroom and looked
under the rug. There it was. I grabbed it and ran and unlocked my Caitlyn's door.
Before I opened it, like some people I know, I ran back to the bathroom and put the
key back in it's position, almost perfectly. When I opened her door, she was sprawled
on her bed, looking at her Taylor Launter pictures. Crazy, I know. But wait for the
next part. She always looks at them when she's upset. She says his 'beautiful' face
calms her down. "What do you want?" asked Caitlyn, putting the pictures down and
sitting up. In my most sweetest tone, I said, "I'm sorry you can't go to prom. I
would have been happy because you would be gone for the night and I wouldn't have to
see you,  all night ." "Shut up! Just shut up!" yelled Caitlyn, or as I call
The Drama Queen. "And get OUT!" I quietly walked out and went downstairs. Mom was in
the kitchen making supper. We're having steak. Woo! "Mom," I said. " Caitlyn is
pretty upset." "Well, I'm sorry,but she shouldn't have snuck out last night," Mom
replied. I ran upstairs and my mom called, "What are you doing?" "I'm going
swimming!" I answered. When I came down my mom said, "Don't be long. When this is d
done were having st-" I interupted my mom. I said, "I know, I know. Steak. I could
smell it." We're going to eat on the patio," said Mom. "Ok...," I said and ran
outside the kitchen door and jumped in to the pool.

How was Ch. 1?
Last edited: 29 November 2009

orangecherrysoda says:   28 November 2009   257131  
It was good!

I think you should maybe add some more context in it, to make it
longer and more, i dunno, worded.

But other than that, i like it! I'm excited to see how the rest comes
The_Girl says :   29 November 2009   394141  
thank you soo much! i'll try. i'm not the best of writers


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