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Victim of the EyeCategory: poetry
Thursday, 20 August 2009
10:52:23 PM (GMT)
Waking up is hard to do when your alone

Because the dawn isn't as bright when you're not loved

Every breath is empty

Every thought is retched

How is it possible to scream and not be heard

I want to cry but… but I have no tears

My heart beats but… still it doesn't feel anything

Standing in the darkness… living among these ghosts

I've always stood in the shadow you cast upon me

Is this the life you wanted for me!

The life you thought I so desired!

I hear the bells ringing in the distance

The ominous sound of angels singing

Time… it slows… slows… and slower until…

An image of you infixed… burned in my head

But I break the thought!

And I shatter the mirror!

My only friend…

Comments 
Kylosaur says:   21 August 2009   928859  
Good job


But try some Similies
Really helps
 
‹~Sheri'sBeautifulDisaster~› says :   23 August 2009   958486  
Awww this is so beautiful lol (i sound lame) I really like this a
lot. Im so gonna read more of your poems.
 

 
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