Thursday, 14 August 2008
10:01:41 PM (GMT)
before saying anything else I must give all credit for characters, plot,
setting... pretty much everything to Miss_RolePlay1995.
this is basicly fan fiction, or rather this is where I think the story might
go based on the desicion of my favorite character Naono, who I am very mad at
right now as he is being evil.
Kirti's Mind Theater presents: The repercussions of Naono'a descision in chapter
Mana, Kiri, Spirit, and Hiki are all in chains, captured by Shikuro. Naono stands
beside him as Shikuro begins his revenge speech.
"So. This is how the great "Chosen Player" ends up. Captured. Even that punny Prince
is turning out to be harder to catch then you. And you know what Mana? You deserve
this too." Shikuro looks at Naono out of the corner of his eye and nods, slightly.
At this que Naono begins his long awaited rant against Mana.
"You were alway the one getting attention. The teachers loved you, you got training
here, you always had friends," Naono blinks away tears, "You were almost adopted so
many times! And you turned them down! I saw you! I was waiting by the door way and I
saw then trying to snuggle you and you pushed them away! You didn't even deserve
parents. You didn't work to get them. Everyone was just nice to you because they were
impressed by your stupid flute. That's it. You're nothing special. The truth is
you're just a little orphan who ran off on an adventure and bit off more
then she could chew."
Shikuro smiles and gives the guard the order to kill them
"What? Kill them? Shikuro what are you doing?!" Naono shouts.
Shikuro smiles slighty and says,"My dear boy, I'm getting you your revenge. Isn't
that what you wanted?"
"I didn't want it to go that far! No one was supposed to get hurt, I just wanted
Eichiro and Mana a bit embarressed! And besides, what about those other guys? Hiki
and them? They didn't do anything to us!" Naono says desperatley.
"They helped the enemy" growles Shikuro, smile gone, "And they got in my way."
"NO!" shouts Naono. "You can't kill them! Not for that!"
Shikuro slaps him knocking him to the floor. Naono rubs his stinging cheek as he
stares in shock at the man he'd thought of as a father.
"You're getting in my way too." Shikuro growls "You've lost your usefulness boy. You
can die with the others."
END OF KIRTI MIND THEATER.
actually that's not the "end" but that's where I get sorta choppy.
I have this problem with stories I'm reading and ones I'm writing... I know where I
want a plot to go, or I can tell where it's going but I don't know how to get
anyway I get the vague notion that Eichiro, Sera, and Shiki would burst through a
dungon wall for a rescue, that Naono would be knocked unconcious by the resulting
rock slide, Spirit wouldalready be dead (either protecting Mana/ Naono from the
rocks, being killed by falling rocks before she could get away or she'd been executed
already) and that as they flew away Mana would insist that they had to save Naono
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