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Tuesday, 1 January 2008
11:59:37 AM (GMT)
So, every now and then, I'll put down some random things I think of on here
and... yeah... Most of the stuff that I write down isn't relatively close to what
happens in my real life though.

Hard breathing, soft footing, rough ground. I risked a glance back as I turned a
corner. No! They were catching up! I gasped for air. The muscles in my legs ached and
it felt like my throat was tightening up. I wouldn't ever be able to out run them! I
could feel myself slowing down. I felt like I was going to collaspe. Maybe a short
rest would...

Shouts. NO! I can't slow down, I kept saying to myself. I took in a lot of air and
held my breath. My legs moved in cycle-like motions and my arms pumped in a blur. I
turned another corner and I let my breath out slowly. There! About one hundred meters
away! My escape from this running, this madness. I felt myself slowing in relief. I
looked back.

No! Don't slow down! They're still back there! I shouted at myself. I turned my head
back around and pushed myself further. Fifty meters.... Twenty-five... Come on! I
urdged myself as I heard them coming up closer behind. Then...

I was through. I finished. Cheers were heard around me. I smiled in triumph as I took
the yellow ribbon that was now attached to my stomach and held it up to the sky. I
can't believe it. I won.

I won the four hundred meter race.

Jimpling says:   1 January 2008   916823  
Four hundred meter races are HARD.
They can tire you out in seconds...

That was really great writing.
At first I thoguht it was about someone chasing a person trying to
kill him/her for an unknown reasons.
Then I admit that I skipped to the bottom and found out it was about a

Anyways, your writing's excellent.
Do you write alot?
wolfgirl2_0 says:   1 January 2008   243544  
Thank you! That was what I was going for. A person thinks something,
then at the end they realize it is something else.

Thank you again. Actually, I don't write too much. Sometimes I like to
start off stories, then I lose my inspiration after four or five
chapters.... I've had about eight of those! xD
Jimpling says :   2 January 2008   572675  
I know how that feels...
On my other account I have about 3 unfinished sagas.
They're never going to be finished, I can tell you that


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