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waterCategory: (general)
Wednesday, 18 July 2007
11:05:42 PM (GMT)
Water peacful whole
rushing over my pale feet
loving the coldness

I laugh playfully 
its so cold its burning
its pure ecxtasy

I still my breathing
its sweeping me away with it 
I let myself go

my head droops slightly 
it beckons me in deeper 
It feels heavenly 

I lie on my back 
taking in the salty scent
turning on my mind

I lavish the feel
my face placid my cheeks flushed
dozing off gently 

I truly feel home
in the cool winter green water
i have to go now
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its like a really long haiku each line is a haiku


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