Tuesday, 5 December 2006
02:53:08 PM (GMT)
This is all wrong, lord help me. Help us!
Oh damn my date i forgot, i got dressed quickly and went downstairs.
"Hi, Kirsten, wow you look great." Scotty was a bit taken a-back.
"Hello, um Scotty, can we go now??" i asked nervously i didn't want to sound
"Be back at to, ok?" my mum said and kissed my cheek and i was out the door.
"So where are we going? The youthie? Disco?" i asked.
"Nope, we're going to a pizza parlour." he said coolly. Was he serious, PIZZA!
"Ok, sounds cool!" i faked a smile to please him.
"Wow, um well bye." i said on the phone to Miley.
"Whats up?" Scotty asked when he saw the look on my face.
"It's Miley, she's knocked out, she drunk and on drugs i fear, she couldn't remeber
my name." i said worriedly.
I ran. I saw a gang of boys havign a laugh at her, Scotty ran beside me.
"OI YOU SPAZ'S LEAVE HER ALONE!" i screamed at them, i wish i didn't
"Oh yeah, and what you going to do about it!?" one boy asked, he was bigger and
stronger than me.
"Hey dude back off!" Scotty yelled.
"Ooooh really scared!" the others laughed, picked Scotty up and beated him up.
"Miley, are you ok?" i asked rushing over to her, my white dress covered in blood,
mud and spit.
"Angel, is that an angel?" she aked.
"No silly, it's me Kirsten, oh boy you're really gone out!" i yelled.
As the ambulance and the police left i turned to Scotty.
"Omigosh, your face, are you ok?" i said, i got a hankie out my pusre to stop the
bleeding, but he lowered my hand.
"Leave me be." and kissed me.....Then i felt his hands going all over me. He was
"Um got to go." i pulled away. But he had hold of me tightly.
"Where are you going?" he asked, he was touching my chest, i felt really
uncomfortable. He threw me to the ground and undid his zip.
"OI, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!" a man yelled. Dad! Sirens was coming up and down the
"Uh oh, busted!!" i said in his face and got up. Scotty got a knife out. I screamed.
He was going to plunge it in me, or i was going to walk into it.
I felt pain in my thigh, everything was going dark, saw my mum and dad rushing up to
-I didn't live, i died, this is a warnign to everyone, i trusted Scott, but i woke up
"Kirsten?" I heard Max voice.
"Max." i whispered hoarsly.
"Oh, you poor thing. Look at you." he said, holding my hand. I felt a strange feeling
inside me, Love.
"Max, what was the thing you was going to tell me but you never did??" i asked.
"Oh that," he was going red i could see it. "Well that was, i love you Kirsten." he
said, his lips touched mine, i knew it was right this time.
When he let go. "I love you too Max." i could see his brown hair with blonde streaks
and his blue eyes. His tanned skin.
"I will never let you-" i couldn't hear it, i was dying, i held out for him but i
couldn't, my heart stopped, i couldn't breathe. It was over.
-Scotty faced 15 years in juvie for murder and rape. Max and Miley was goign out with
each other, Scotty only got 15 years. i didn't have any, my parents had a lifelong
penalty, it was wrong but so right in the same way.-