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Friday, 27 April 2007
12:42:12 AM (GMT)
Ack! New poem, duckies ^_^

My Wine by SilkySlihouette

Oh, God, this feels great
Lying in bed, restless, hiccuping and giggling
Like it's prom night all over again
Like when I had the house to myself,
And mother just had to have the bottle of Brazilian wine in the cupboard
Like I'm seeing things before my eyes
And the memories just won't go away
So I'm swirling and I don't think I can hold the bottle for very long
Because it just got so heavy all of a sudden
And they won't go away
It's father here, laughing with me, talking
But I don't remember his voice any more
And the sunlight is covering his face and it's
So fustrating
Because I just can't seem to remember him any more
Like I shouldn't
And he can't be here, honey, he just can't
Then it gets turned into,
He won't come back, just deal with it. He won't be back!
Oh, how I'd like to believe that
But My Wine is telling me otherwise
And My Wine is the only one I have
Snap back to reality
The bottle slips from my fingers
And the memories flood back
And so do the tears
Can't seem to stop them; it's like a broken dam
I fall to my knnes, only because they turn into jelly
And my head is spinning
Because I just can't seem ot remember his face, and his voice
Sobs and wracks and nonsense and mutters
My Wine
My Wine
Where's My Wine


It doesn't rhyme. Hope you all like it and comment if you want. Suggestions,
comments, whatever floats your boat.

Comments 
MoonlitTearsGabriella says:   27 April 2007   864475  
Emotional, passionate, and very telling. ^^ Duckie blood too.
MoonlitTearsGabriella says:   27 April 2007   265727  
That sounded wrong; It's an inside joke! xD
SilkySilhouette says:   27 April 2007   292193  
Thankies ^_^ Haha, yup, an inside joke. I bet whoever else is reading
this, was very confused XD
EmeraldRubySaphire says:   1 May 2007   866413  
Nice poem. But, of course, I can do better.
SilkySilhouette says:   1 May 2007   272884  
Pft. Yeah right! You can't write poems to save your life, girly! I've
seen your notebooks full of poems, and they all reek of bad poetry!
EmeraldRubySaphire says:   1 May 2007   611488  
Gasp! Such big words for such a little girl. And when have you snuck
into my room and looked at my notebooks?! Do I need a lock on my door
for my privacy?!
SilkySilhouette says:   1 May 2007   432189  
-_-'  Mia, this is really not the place for such argument. You're
supposed to be commenting my poem here, not bringing up personal
issues! Don't mail me either!
EmeraldRubySaphire says :   1 May 2007   475258  
Don't pop a vein, child.

Your poem is good. Kudos.

Ciao, darlin'

 
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