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Naïveté Will Be The Death Of MeCategory: poemsss
Friday, 15 July 2011
12:38:13 AM (GMT)
I'm naive, but I won't change. 
You'll see,
Someday the world will change
For me.

I've burned everything I've cooked in the last eight days.
And I ate it ashes and all.
The stove lit up with a big pretty blaze,
Now I'm just staring at these soot-stained walls.

You're just like my new shoes
You give me oozing blisters
You're just like my love life
You love to run with scissors 

You're like a crazy person on MTV
You make death threats looking in a mirror
You get so mad your breath fogs up the glass
And you wash it off with your tears

You're like a ghost of my childhood
You're far too often alone
Your best friends are imaginary 
And you're nervous when you talk on the phone 

Let's pray this is all a misunderstanding 
I'll pray they're all lying to me
I'll die to know you told the truth
I'll die trusting without proof

I'm naive, but I won't change.
You see, 
I'm still naive enough to think
The world will change 
For me. 
Last edited: 15 July 2011

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‹Canadian Bacon› says:   15 July 2011   506328  
"I've burned everything I've cooked in the last eight days.
And I ate it ashes and all.
The stove lit up with a big pretty blaze,
Now I'm just staring at these soot-stained walls."

What a powerful verse. This really impacted me. Excellent writing.
Do you mind if I quote you on my profile?
 
‹✖[[AntisocialButterfly]]✖› says:   15 July 2011   781703  
Oh, thank you. 
You can, as long as you don't say you wrote it.
Because you didn't... 

I mean.. I'm flattered. x]

I'm 'Lexii Larkspur', if you want to quote me.
@Porkalicious 
 
‹Canadian Bacon› says :   15 July 2011   182361  
Of course! I would never post it as my own work. <3
 

 
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