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Sunday, 13 February 2011
04:28:46 PM (GMT)
For everyonet that doesn't know (which is basically EVERYONE) I'm writing a story. I
need some help of character names and places but I've got the plot figured out. It's
about a girl in high school who has a crush on a guy that doesn't know she is even
alive. At the same time she is being bullied by a girl who she thinks knows her
secret. I'll explain more in the preview.


Main Girls:

      elouai's doll maker 3
Name: Valentine Matthews (It's nearly valentine's day and I was feeling creative)
Age: 16
Personatlity: Shy but once you get to know her sweet and caring.

      elouai's doll maker 3
Name: Izzy Glass
Age: 16
Pesonality: _Izzy is kind and cheeky. Unlike most popular girls Izzy is really nice
and not snotty. She is the crush of many guys in school including the one Valentine

      elouai's doll maker 3
Name: No name yet
Age: 16
Persoanlity: Mysterious and harsh. She is the one who torments Valentine.

      elouai's doll maker 3
Name: Adrian Watson
Age: 16
Personality: Kind, Sweet, chatty and kind of annoying. He is Valentine's crush.

      elouai's doll maker 3
Name: Collin Woods
Age: 16
Personality: Geeky and smart. He is Valentine's best friend.
Last edited: 13 February 2011

Bornwriting says:   13 February 2011   775098  
The mean girl could be Angela Stone.
pinkypincessz says:   19 February 2011   730440  
Such a common storyline.
rawr_letsdance says:   25 February 2011   891377  
the mean girl could be Tess?
‹~Zeekie~› asks:   25 February 2011   888408  
I clicked, and now I ask.
Where did you make the people?!
singmealovesong says:   26 February 2011   174465  
Omgg(: i love cheessy stories like these;D
I thinkk Collin is supperr sexyy
Im_a_dreamer says:   1 March 2011   158502  
What do you mean? Sorry my brain is switched off today 

Lol, I love his glasses as they match with his face! I love writing
cheesy stories! Go Cheesy! 
‹Ninja.Pocky(っ>ω<)っ› says:   29 May 2011   155240  
I've been browsing through profiles, pages and diaries and I
stumbled across this one. Looks like I'm pretty late. xD But anyway..
Are you still pushing through with this story? I'm just asking, 'cause
I love reading stories and would like to see yours and maybe help out
a bit.
May I say my opinions about this? (I'm going to type them anyway so
asking this question is pointless actually.)
Well, the plot is kinda common. Nice girl who likes a guy, mean
popular girl bullying her, etc. This is really common. It doesn't seem
that interesting, to be honest. I'm not trying to be mean or anything,
I'm just stating my opinion. Maybe putting some twists and turns in
this, it could be more interesting. But as for now, the plot is
just... Common, like I said before.
The characters you made are cute, I love eLouai dolls. C: I like
Izzy's outfit, haha. xD So anyway.. Are you gonna push through with
this? C:
Im_a_dreamer says :   4 September 2011   866684  
Sorry about replying really really late! I've been inactive for a
while and reading through the initial plot for this, I'd rather just
forget about this plot thing -_-. I don't have any idea's for this
anymore so... Thanks for the comment though! Don't worry about it
being mean, I like constructive criticism. XD 


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