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Thursday, 5 February 2009
02:40:36 AM (GMT)
Chapter 1 
                                The Attack 

	I awoke in a Daze to large metal clashing and people running and screaming. I was in
the navy a Private Pvt. Jackson. I was on my bunk sleeping when it happened. The boat
was in a port named Pearl Harbor. I saw everyone was trying to get to the top as it
was getting bombed. They didn’t want to sink to the bottom with the boat. I got up
to follow them but I stumbled and fell I was really tired. Then Lieutenant Vickers
grabbed my arm and pulled me up. I ran out of the room. So did Vickers but by the
time he got close to the door the ceiling fell in and killed him. 
	As I ran along the narrow hallways I saw dead soldiers and broken pipes spitting out
steam. The kitchens were on fire. I ran no men were there to help they were either
dead or at the top already.  The ship was falling apart doorways were closed off and
there was no escape. The Carbon Dioxide from the fires were eating at my lungs. I was
going to die like Vickers. 
	Then the top blew reveling light and fresh air. I got Cpl. Hanes to pull me out of
there. I was saved but the planes were everywhere they were Japanese fighters we were
in a war we didn’t want to fight ww2. I grabbed a gewher and started to fire shots
at the plane and nothing happened. The ship was sinking we were running out of time
then I saw something that wasn’t human inside the cockpit of the fighter.

Grace_Zeigler says:   5 February 2009   833687  
the horror!! D8!! XD
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   113355  
is it good
‹XxXImHis_Pretty_RaveGirlXxX› says:   5 February 2009   321699  
wow! good job! 8D
Grace_Zeigler says:   5 February 2009   761299  
I like it. ^-^
‹<20/20Hindsight>› says:   5 February 2009   387824  
who gave u that story...
pearl harbor was terrible and it really pisses me off to even think
about that day...
is it just a story or is it historical, as in real?
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   287132  
sorry just thought of a book
Sk8terGirlxx says:   5 February 2009   886434  
AWSOME! I like itt ^^
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   942675  
its a story
‹<20/20Hindsight>› says:   5 February 2009   476516  
it's a good story but a lot of my family have been in wars... i think
i had a great grandfather or something that fought in wwII and my
grandfather fought in veitnam... he doesn't talk about it... ever...
except to me, i'm the only person he has ever said anything about that
war to...
my uncles a navy seal and my dad was in the national gaurd, and i'm in
the civil air patrol
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   148899  
sry i didnt know
‹<20/20Hindsight>› says:   5 February 2009   848851  
don't be sorry, i wasn't assaulting u or anything... just giving u
some info on some stuff i'm proud about...
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   268371  
well my great aunt survived it by jumping in the bathtub and my great
great uncle was captured by the japs and every member of his team was
decappitated its a story and nothin else ok i love our veterens
‹+The Lilysaur!+› shouts:   5 February 2009   768453  
omg its awesome!!!!!
‹<20/20Hindsight>› says:   5 February 2009   839863  
me too
my grampa's awesome, he flew bombers and was with the ground forces as
a seargeant
ToriAmazing says:   5 February 2009   771342  
That was reeally really good
Nightmaregirl says:   5 February 2009   454482  
‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   5 February 2009   342489  
Nice job! :D if i tried to do this it would end up really bad.
‹TheVoicesMadeMeDoIt› says:   5 February 2009   221749  
wow ur a great writer, i wish i wer like u lol
‹Funn_size› says:   5 February 2009   174936  
awesome writing
‹the_one_that_got_away ♥› says:   5 February 2009   565879  
hey iread it and that was really good wat inspired you to write about
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   5 February 2009   266152  
well i got an idea of a story that maybe the japs didnt do this
selina009 wonders:   6 February 2009   663378  
Wow that was amazing..but could you probably make it longer?
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   6 February 2009   893762  
yeah i think i will make it longer
maddy_the_awesome_one says:   15 February 2009   566154  
i liek it so far
‹☠☻♡えみり エルリック〜!♡☻☠› says :   5 March 2009   591684  
Very good~!


Imma go read the other chapters nao


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