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The little orphan chapter 18Category: The┬ little┬ orphan┬ story
Wednesday, 13 August 2008
05:37:13 PM (GMT)
Fishi was right. Her friends had come much fast then Mana could bring them. Sera and Shiki went under Mikan's arms for support. Mana had been neglecting her friends ever since they arrived in the other world, at it had been dubbed by her friends. Mana went to walk befise her friends. A few silent moments passed. "So, Mana..." Sera started. "How's your training?" "It's ok. I cast my first spell today." "Lucky..." Shiki muttered under her breath. "Don't worry, Shiki. I'm pretty sure they'll teach you too. And if they don't, I will." Mana said confidently. "Look, I'm sorry for neglecting you guys the past few days..." "No worries, Mana. We understand." Sera chimed. "So, we're still BFF's?" "Of course!" * It took them awhile to get back into Giaga. As they were walking through town, Mana was in the center of the group. Takuya and Kiri were behind her. She couldn't help but overhear their conversation. "Kiri." "What is it?" "See that purple haired she-elf? She's been spying on me since we arrived in Giaga." "A stalker?" "No, there seems to be something almost...familiar about her." Mana looked around to see if she could spy the girl Takuya was talking about. She soon spotted her. She had violet hair, and a plain tunic. She didn't look any older then Takuya. "That's Tamiu." Mana swung her head to see Etsuya was beside her. "She's one of the youngest elves in the village, and was a real troublemaker, along with her twin brother." "Who's her brother?" "It's been so long, his name escapes me, but when they were seven, He was kidnapped. Nobody has heard from him since." "That's sad..." " 'Tis. Now she does something useful. She helps the elves here who can't take care of themselves. I'm sure she still misses her brother." Mana couldn't help but feel sorry for her. She suddenly wondered if she had any lost siblings... * When they were back at Etsuya's hut, they immidiatly started treating Mikan's ankle. Mana told everyone she wanted to explore Giaga. Nobody minded, and Spirit wanted to come too, so Mana took her along. She sat on Mana's shoulder as they toured the village. "So, how are you liking the hero biz, Miss Chosenplayer?" "I'm not very fond of it..." "It has benifits, you know. Fame, friendship, respect." Mana thought back to when she was still in school. Nobody respected her in the orphanage... Mana felt herself dragged between two huts. Spirit screamed in alarm. She fought back to see who yanked her. It was the elf teen, Tamiu. "Would you mind telling me why you yanked me so rudely?" "I just need to know something, Chosenplayer." "Which is...?" "I someone named Takuya traveling with you?" "Yes..." "Then, he has finally returned!" "Returned?" "Why,yes." "He's never been here before-" "Yes he has! When he was little!" "How would you know?" "I'm his sister!" "How? You're an elf and he isn't?" Tamiu flintched at the remark. "...He isn't?" "No." Mana suddenly felt sorry for yelling at her. "I-I'm sorry then. Continue what you were doing, Chosenplayer." She did a little curtsy. Mana turned around and quickly walked out of the alley. Spirit was hanging onto her shirt the whole time. She nearly fell off when Mana was yanked. Spirit quickly scrambled up onto Mana's shoulder. "What on earth was that about?" "I don't know, but something tells me there is a lot I still need to learn about this world." * When Mana got back to the hut, she saw Mikan was up and about, trying to limp on her foot. Mana was suprised that they didn't give her crutches or something else to support her. She looked like she was struggling... Mana ran back outside and scoured the ground for any branches she could use for crutches. It didn't take her long to find two Y-shaped branches that could be used for crutches. She went back to the hut, and showed Mikan how to use them. She accepted them greatfully, thanking Mana. Mana was glad she could help, but she was sure she would do fine. She seemed cheery, but inside, something was hurting her. Just like Shiki. Shiki was getting along very well with Hiki. Mana couldn't get over how much coincedences they had. But Shiki was an orphan. She didn't have any siblings...did she? Mana was glad to see that Eichiro had cheered up a bit since he woke up. He spent a lot of his time flying with Taheiji. Mana was glad that he wasn't upset, but she still wanted to ask him about his relationship with Muskinatu. She was still weary about their relationship. * Deep in the forest, south of Giaga, Naono was laying on the ground, still trying to get thr breath that was knocked out of him. By some miracle, He had avoided hitting any trees, but when he landed, he skidded on the ground, skinning his right arm. He lay on the ground for a few hours before he got the strength to stagger to his feet. Man, was he feeling low. The prince kid, Eichiro, Him and his pet were going to pay for openly mocking him. He had taken just too much abuse over his life, and he was going to take it out on Eichiro and his friends. He didn't even care about the orphanage anymore. This was about revenge. He looked around at his surroundings. There were trees every way he looked. There was no sign of life anywhere. The forest was dead silent. He was lost. But he wasn't alone. He could suddenly sense another presence in the silent forest. He felt eyes bore into his back. He swung around to see another human was with him. All the way out here? The figure was a man nearly a decade older then Naono. He had brown hair and menacing eyes. He wore a cload so his body was hidden. "You're Naono, I assume?" Naono didn't answer. "Were you bullied by that wretch, Eichiro?" Naono remained silent, but he put his good hand to his skinned arm, despite it stinging. The man seemed pleased. "You want to get him bac,don't you? You want revenge." Naono could feel the hate from over the years coming out. "And what about that girl, Mana? Isn't she your sworn enemy?" The man was right. Mana and him hated each other from day one. "We both have the need to give both of them what they deserve." Naono finally found the courage to speak. "Wh-who are you?" "Me? I'm Shikuro." Naono flintched. the man from Eichiro's past? "We both have the need to get revenge on those two kids, and their friends, right?" Naono slowly nodded, breathing heavy. Shikuro held out his hand. "Join me, and I promise I can give you the revenge you want.I can teach you things they are forbidden to know." Naono's face showed determination, and he reached his good hand out and grabbed Shikuro's. A/n: Sorry if that last part was a bit strange. I was doing that part of what I has invisioned. not what I had on paper. (I never really planne to put that part, but I wanted to show readers what happens. ) Kirti will probably hate me for a few days, so i'm going to go hide in a dumpster now. *sprints off and trips and sprains ankle.*
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Comments 
MeepingMeep says:   13 August 2008   112689  
Intresting chapter.... Very suspensful...
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   13 August 2008   342453  
yey. thank you. 
I was worried that it wasn't good enough.
when kirti finds me, i'm gunna die. time to hide. *jumps back in
dumpster*
 
Kirti says:   13 August 2008   886755  
!!!!!!!!!!!!! *turns away*
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   13 August 2008   871334  
*pokes head out of dumpster*
please don't hate me. D:
 
‹SqueeneyTodd› says:   13 August 2008   675385  
Wow, great chapter. Interesting...
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   13 August 2008   892993  
*in dumpster* phant who.
 
callie11 says:   13 August 2008   345232  
Nice. Really suspenceful. 

Why is Kirti going ot kill you?
 
Kirti says:   13 August 2008   587271  
'cause I'm Naonos biggest fan and he's lost, hurt, and he's being
tricked into help Shikuro thus bringing him from petty revenge to full
blown evil!!

a little 13 year old tech geek evil?!!! evil! And all because nobody
cared about him growing up! he just wanted a family......!
 
Kirti says:   13 August 2008   591418  
rawr.
 
Kirti says:   13 August 2008   243281  
pluse she kept calling him "Nanon" which also makes me mad.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   13 August 2008   839775  
*laughs nervously though dumpster*
I swear, it's a typ-o!
*checks lock, in case kirti does any sudden moves*
I type it way too fast. i'll go revise now...
 
‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   13 August 2008   929413  
awesome chapter  ah Naono has gone super evil AHHHHHH
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   13 August 2008   434752  
*through dumpster*
That's why im in here, creating chapter 19, instead of out there,
where the mob can get me.
 
Kirti says:   14 August 2008   649772  
He's not that evil! Nobody cared about the kid his whole life,
somebody he just met just had him left into the woods to die and out
comes the first person, ever, to care about Naono's thoughts
and feelings!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   14 August 2008   196355  
That's why Naono trusted him. It's not really the best thing, though.
D:
Ick, it stinks in here.
 
‹{ÔśťÔśĆÔś×}› says:   14 August 2008   826359  
o_________O
What is going on with you and Kirti? I care about him. But (no offense
kirti) he is in the list of the bad guy. Miss_Roleplay1995 had to make
him even more evil someday!
Oh, By the way, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! And I'm starting school again, so
I guess this chapter is the best thing that will eventually happen to
me today.
 
Kirti says:   14 August 2008   864315  
you can come out, and leave the lid open because Naono's goin
to have to hide.  Roar on you Naono, no making deals with the evilest
person in the story who tortures people and other evil things like
that! *trys to jump and tackle Naono but he screams dodges and runs
away while I'm on the ground.* "you get back here!!"
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   14 August 2008   497922  
*climbs out of dumpster smelling horrible.*
space: I'm homeschooling this year, so I can still work on this a bit
more then regular school.
Kirti:lol he don't know that yet. he was manipulated.
 
Kirti says:   14 August 2008   963378  
*grumbling* humph. He got away anyway.

pew! you really do smell bad! here I convenently have a stick of
deoderant, a bottle of perfum, shampoo (strawberry!), conditioner (no
tangles), several bars of soap, a towel, and a tub of warm water.

because you just never know what you'll need. (bathe in your clothes
though I didn't bring a washing machine.)
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   14 August 2008   498177  
wow. 
who needs to carry that stuff?
oh wait, you do. my bad :D
ok, i'll go off and freshen up.
*goes off to get clean*
 
Kirti says:   15 August 2008   899323  
virtually I can carry anything. the internet is a wonderful thing.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   15 August 2008   267735  
true. I often wonder how it was invented...no wait, i'd rather not
think about that D:
i'll just make my head hurt
 
MewMewSugar says:   15 August 2008   291519  
yay! write more!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   15 August 2008   455732  
I am :D
although i'm having a hard time concentrating on it...
 

 
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