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Broken Dreams Of MineCategory: Important that you read and comment!!
Saturday, 10 May 2008
07:32:04 AM (GMT)
This is a beautiful poem that i came up with, it took me 20minuits to write!

plz comment:

Broken Dreams of mine

I put my broken dreams
In a bottle of mine
Iíll lock it away
Where no one can find

Beneath your feet
Thundering sound
Put on repeat

Iíll light candles
So Iíll feel less alone
My doors have no handles
In my empty home

We who walk the earth
Are filled with greed
And i have to desert
My every dream

Iíll lock myself in
Iíll never come out
Cause what I have seen
Fills me with doubt

Iíll sleep for years
I will sleep sweet
And escape my fears
Of your emphasized feat

Iíll sleep with my bottle
Iíll give you a sign
If any one is looking


Soo... what did u think? :3

‹‚ô•Star_Dust‚ô•› says:   10 May 2008   242684  
that was good!
StrangeLover says:   10 May 2008   314553  
hmhm, thank u very muchi!
‹¬ß‚ô•Completely and Totally ME‚ô•¬ß› says:   3 June 2008   884733  
very......... different
StrangeLover says :   4 June 2008   816341  
diffrent? In a good or bad way?


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