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I do dark poem requestsCategory: Poem
Saturday, 8 September 2007
05:50:26 PM (GMT)
If you want a dark poem about yourself let me know. I will make one for you heres
one i made about me.

Left alone in this cold world. surroned by darkness. Nobody can hear me screm. I try
to fight the pain away; but again, tears stream down my face. Heart broken. left
alone to deal with the memories. My heart is broken gully. i feel the need to throw
up. And to kill. I find a knife. to the naked eye; it's just a knife. But to me; it's
a knife soon covered in my own blood. splattered everywhere. nobody cares. i hear no
more voices; but still i feel this pain. late up at night; crying, bloody, and
listinging to myu depressing music. She left me with nothing but the memories. She
has to tell me she loves another. I stay up all night; screaming bleeding; dying.


Let me know if you want a poem.

Comments 
XxForbidden_LoveXx says:   8 September 2007   377715  
I want one!
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   8 September 2007   475467  
Here's XxForbidden_LoveXx's


FOrbidden

I see a girl with a prety face she's lurking in the shadows. SHe walks
past me and hugs her boyfriend. THere's no use in tring to get her.
Going around the school still lurking looking of a girl/boy to get. I
see Alishia. My friend scince the strat. I have no idea why; but now
she has my heart. I walk up almost right behind her but then i see.
She has a boyfriend who just isn't made for me. I give up on my life
the day id groing darker as the senors have a party even though i was
invited. The moon came out and the light hit me like a bomb. my name
is XxForbidden_loveXx so therre's no hope at all.
 
love_swimming_girl says:   10 September 2007   844546  
omg awsome poems i want one!!!!!!
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   10 September 2007   516858  
Ok here's love_swimming_girl's 

I sink to the bottom of the pool. late at midnight, when there's
nobody around. I see bubbles of air escape from me. Blood soon rushes
up. I panic; but remain calm all the same. This is what i wanted. I
love swimmin, so im going to die swimming. enough pain, tourcher, and
agony. END MY LIFE  NO MORE HESITATION! The sky is filled with dark
black clouds that only i can see. theres somthing burning inside; and
it's my death i soon can see.
 
love_swimming_girl says:   10 September 2007   439299  
AWSOME!!!!!!!
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   10 September 2007   628795  
THankx! i knew a couple peopple here appreciated me
 
freakstalker says:   13 September 2007   126593  
I want one please!
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   13 September 2007   935537  
k. Here's youres "frealkstalker"

In the darkness. no light. Isolated. I hide in the shadows while i
wait for my slow, painful death. I have a disguise. But i have
reavealed it. STUPID ME STUPIS STUPID ME! I hate all sighs of life.
Just hate it
 
‹jazmineeeee :D› says:   16 September 2007   623962  
wo jordan..
 
darkninashi says:   26 September 2007   113357  
do me!!!!
‹Puppeh.› says:   26 September 2007   447356  
This sound interesting.
I want to try.
 
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   27 September 2007   559546  
Thnks  u guys darkninashi

A dark, cloudy stormy day. days like these make me feel like dying.
the rain hitting the floor. the lightning, oh the lighning hitting
anything it can, and the thunder crash, boom, bang. I scream at the
top of my lungs. b ut i am noto heard. I blend in with the shadows. I
wish i could die. The darkness of this day hides all of my lonly
tears. the only thing i want... is for this storm to stop.
 
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   27 September 2007   133384  
MewMewPuppy!

There is a disguse behind everybody's happyness. Could be sarrow,
anger, real happyness, anything. It's hard to keep this disguise any
longer. I have my best friends by my side to help me Turn on some
music, end the pain. Out in the moonlight, the night is quiet. nobody
else knows who i am. they all think i'm a generally happy person. it's
all a trick. to hide the truth...
 
darkninashi says:   28 September 2007   857593  
oh my gosh mine is awsome
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   29 September 2007   787487  
thanks! and you're one of Hikatis friends right?
 
‹YUPPIE~~♥› says:   16 October 2007   424815  
there good i want one plz (about a guy i luved for 3 years)
 
‹<_JuRrDuUhHn_>› says:   17 October 2007   591731  
okies.

There he is. The guy i've loved for 3 years. Never noticed, never
heard, but im somehow always there. He looks at me; i look at him, But
i am still not noticed. He laughs and laughs with his friends while i
am surronded by morons. I lay out the things i will need. A book, and
maybe a flashlight. But i HATE him now. SCREAM MY NAME INTO THE
DARKNESS! no one will hear you.
 
LilithJade says:   23 March 2009   941197  
Write one about me ...^^ and do your best....
‹hexx› says:   23 March 2009   383726  
I want one!!!
 
‹† Ammit Eats Dead Souls †› says:   24 March 2009   516215  
Jordan, poems are written to express your feelings. When you write
them about a person for a request, it just takes away the very essence
of the poem.
Its how you feel and how people express themselves.
Although, I hate to admit I did write Arlee's poem once for her. And I
think she got an A.
We had a girl last year that wrote and sold her poems. First off, they
werent that good, and second, its wrong. 
Just dont you ever try to sell them. I will suzi-kill you ^>^
 
XXterriblebrokenlifeXX says :   16 April 2012   583957  
I want a poem

I have three broken homes and I'm 13 life sucks love sucks living
sucks death is fascinating
 
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